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You work for a magazine and your magazine is going to improve its contents according to suggestions of readers. Write a letter to the one of your readers.

You work for a magazine and your magazine is going to improve its contents according to suggestions of readers. Write a letter to the one of your readers. PkalJ
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to request you some suggestions to improve the materials of our magazine. Firstly, I would kindly express my gratitude to you for participation in our questionaire. The point is that, we are planning to enrich the content to satisfy the needs of the readers. For instance, it would be so generous of you to suggest what kind of materials you and your family would like to read. In addition, if possible, could you please provide with some information about what branches of society we need to focus on while preparing our materials. Finally, it would be great if you could suggest what educational materials shoul we prepare to improve and gain readerʼs attention. I hope our request will not inconvenience you much. I look forward to hearing from you regarding this matter soon. Yours sincerely,
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to request you
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some
suggestions to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
the materials of our magazine.

Firstly
, I would kindly express my gratitude to you for participation in our
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questionaire
. The point is that, we are planning to enrich the content to satisfy the needs of the readers.
For instance
, it would be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
generous of you to suggest what kind of materials you and your family would like to read.

In addition
, if possible, could you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
provide with
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
information about what branches of society we need to focus on while preparing our materials.

Finally
, it would be great if you could suggest what educational materials
Possible spelling mistake found.
shoul
we prepare to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
improve
and gain
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readerʼs
attention.

I hope our request will not inconvenience you much. I look forward to hearing from you regarding this matter
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
,
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IELTS letter You work for a magazine and your magazine is going to improve its contents according to suggestions of readers. Write a letter to the one of your readers.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
144 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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