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You work for a large corporation you want to apply for one month sleeve going to illness. Write your manager requesting leave for the same. Introduce yourself. Describe your illness. Inform the manager how you intend to manager job assignment in your absence.

You work for a large corporation you want to apply for one month sleeve going to illness. Write your manager requesting leave for the same. Introduce yourself. Describe your illness. Inform the manager how you intend to manager job assignment in your absence. 06Vnq
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to requesting you about grant me medical leave for one month. My name is Kosha Thakkar and I am working in a design department at morning shift. I am suffering from physical disease called gastric ulcer and high fever. Doctor has prescribed medication and an advice to take plenty of rest. As I have to visit hospital every two days; I am not able to come at work regularly on the contract it can cause higher infection spreading. The design editing and approval can be managed by staying at home. I will be in constant Contact with the team member and make sure that assignment will be complete within deadline. Client call and request can be handled via email. I assure you that in my absence work will not get suffer. Please find attached medical reports. Looking forward for your positive feedback. Regards, Kosha Thakkar
Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to requesting you about grant me medical
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leave
for one month. My name is
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Kosha
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Thakkar and
I am working in a design department at morning shift.

I am suffering from physical disease called gastric ulcer and high fever. Doctor has prescribed medication and
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "advice".
an advice
to take
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plenty
of rest. As I
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
have to
visit hospital every two days; I am not able to
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come
at work
regularly
on the contract it can cause higher infection spreading.

The design editing and approval can
be managed
by staying at home. I will be in constant Contact with the team member and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
sure that assignment will be complete within deadline. Client call and request can
be handled
via email. I assure you that in my absence work will not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
suffer.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Please
find attached medical reports. Looking forward for your
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
feedback.

Regards,
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Kosha
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Thakkar

IELTS letter You work for a large corporation you want to apply for one month sleeve going to illness. Write your manager requesting leave for the same. Introduce yourself. Describe your illness. Inform the manager how you intend to manager job assignment in your absence.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
151 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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