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Write a letter to your friend that lives abroad. Ask him or her help you find a patr-time job when you study aboad.

Write a letter to your friend that lives abroad. Ask him or her help you find a patr-time job when you study aboad. Q8boX

Dear Laylo. How is your doing? I am writing you about my visit your country next month. As I informed you on my previous letter, I decided to study abroad. I am going to there in 3 or 4 weeks. Because there are all aminities are ready to study and work as well the same time. When I arrived in London, I need a job. You I will have a lot of free time after studying. That's why, I am going to involved any work which I can do in my free time. Would you help me find a job till I arrive there. You know it takes a long time to find a job. I will arrive in time of begining of my studying. If you found a job I would strat it there. I would be happy if you helped me find a job. Write me. Best wishes. Nigora.

Dear Possible spelling mistake found.LaylaLay lo
Laylo
.

How is your doing? I am writing you about my visit your country next
 month.

As I informed you on my previous letter, I decided to study abroad. I am There isn't usually a preposition before "there". Did you mean "going there"?going there
going to there
 in 3 or 4 weeks. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 there are all Possible spelling mistake found.amenities
aminities
 are ready to study and work as well
 the same time.

When I arrived in London, I need a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. You I will have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 free time after studying. That's why, I am going to 'Going to' requires the base form: "involve"involve
involved
 any work which I can do in my free time.

Would you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 me find a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 till I arrive there. You know it takes a long time to find a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
. I will arrive in time of Possible spelling mistake found.beginning
begining
 of my studying. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you found a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtaskappointmentofficebusinesscareerassignment
job
 I would Possible spelling mistake found.startstratastrawstraitstrapstray
strat
 it there.

I would be happy if you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me find a job.

Write me.

Best wishes. Possible spelling mistake found.NigeriaRigorIgorNiagaraNigerNagoya
Nigora
. 