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you visited post office to send a packet. There was a long queue and you had to wait for your turn. Write a letter to post master for the same.

you visited post office to send a packet. There was a long queue and you had to wait for your turn. Write a letter to post master for the same. RyboP

My name is Rakesh Patil and I went to post office of Bopal to do speed post of mark sheet to the Canada of Government. When I reached over there, I saw long queue which consist of pregnant woman and senior citizens along with other citizens. There was horrible condition and meshed up as only one counter was working hence, I stood up in line for at least 5 hours in line. This is my humble request to you that please arrange special counters or separate line for pregnant female and senior resident. Moreover start token system with timing for the citizens as this system will allow people to come to post office at a particular time and also aware people regarding use of online service of Indian post service which will also reduce burden on the local post office for their work. I will be very thankful to you to implemented above mentioned suggestions as soon as possible because this will be benefit to both customer and post office in term of time and service. Yours faithfully, Rakesh Patil

My name is Rakesh Possible spelling mistake found.PatelPatioPailPa til
Patil
 and I went to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpolepanel
post
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 of Possible spelling mistake found.BhopalOpalB opal
Bopal
 to do speed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpolepanel
post
 of mark sheet to the Canada of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
Government
. When I reached over there, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 long queue which consist of pregnant woman and senior citizens along with other citizens. There was horrible condition and meshed up as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one counter was working hence
, I stood up in line for at least 5 hours in line.

This is my humble request to you that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 arrange special counters or separate line for pregnant female and senior resident. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 token system with timing for the citizens as this system will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpolepanel
post
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 at a particular time and also
 aware This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 regarding This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of online service of Indian You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpolepanel
post
 service which will also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviate
reduce
 burden on the local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpolepanel
post
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 for their work.

I will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 thankful to you to implemented above mentioned suggestions as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 this will be benefit to both customer and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpolepanel
post
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
 in term of time and service.

Yours faithfully
,

Rakesh Possible spelling mistake found.PatelPatioPailPa til
Patil