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Write a letter to accomadation officer about the problem at the collage

Write a letter to accomadation officer about the problem at the collage k5rPM

Dear Mr. Johnson. I am writing to complain about the problem which is related to the living conditions and roommates who live with me at the dormitory. I live on the second floor with two roommates in the 45 th room. Our room is very small for sharing with three pupils and It is also very hot during the daytime that interupts us to study and be busy with our business. One more problem is that my roommates always listen to a loud music and they disturb me even during the evening. I am going to pass exam in 3 weeks. That's why, I need more peaceful time in order to prepare my exams. However, my poor conditions of room and my roommates make me tired and be unconcentrated for preparing exams. I would be greatfull you if you helped me to change my room. I am looking forward to hearing you. Your sincerially. Andy.

Dear Mr. Johnson.

I am writing to complain about the problem which is related
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I am looking forward to hearing you.

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. Andy. 