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you work at home and home a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. write a letter to shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter. Describe the problem with the equipment * explain how this problem is affecting your work * say what you want the shop or company to do

you work at home and home a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. write a letter to shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter. Describe the problem with the equipment * explain how this problem is affecting your work * say what you want the shop or company to do pBpy
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to inform you that I am unable to use WIFI broadband at home which I am using for official purpose only. I would like to tell you about the concern that, yesterday evening, when I was working on the laptop, suddenly it stopped working, and disconnected from the device and was getting an error ‘no network. I even rebooted it many times but nothing worked. Now, it is not showing any green signal, and the red light is continuously blink My job is getting suffered because I have some urgent meetings with my clients and essential assignments which I have to submit to the boss on time. If I do not complete my task within a timeline, I might be lost the job in the company, therefore, I need to resolve this issue as soon as possible. I request you to please send your representative at home so that It can be solved and I can resume office work at the earliest. Otherwise, if possible, you may provide me replacement of the modem as it is under a warranty period. I hope that you will give the best resolution for the same. I am looking forward to your positive response. Yours faithfully Amrit Kaur
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to inform you that I am unable to
use
WIFI
broadband at home which I am using for official purpose
only
.

I would like to
tell
you about the concern that, yesterday evening, when I was working on the laptop,
suddenly
it
stopped
working, and disconnected from the device and was getting an error ‘no network.
I
even rebooted it
many
times
but
nothing worked.
Now
, it is not showing any green signal, and the red light is
continuously
blink

My job is getting suffered
because
I have
some
urgent meetings with my clients and essential assignments which I
have to
submit to the boss on time. If I do not complete my task within a timeline, I might
be lost
the job in the
company
,
therefore
, I need to resolve this issue as
soon
as possible.

I request you to
please
send
your representative at home
so
that It can
be solved
and I can resume office work at the earliest.
Otherwise
, if possible, you may provide me replacement of the modem as it is under a warranty period. I hope that you will give the best resolution for the same.

I am looking forward to your
positive
response.

Yours
faithfully


Amrit
Kaur
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IELTS letter you work at home and home a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. write a letter to shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter. Describe the problem with the equipment * explain how this problem is affecting your work * say what you want the shop or company to do

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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