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You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take N1xj
Dear Mr. Smith, My name is Tahjib, tenant of your apartment no. B/6, Ranking Street. I am writing to let you know that I am unhappy with the present condition of some of the furniture which has been provided with the apartment. While some of the furniture is new, few of the furniture became unusable and unrepairable at the same time. I hope you will consider my situation favorably. Let me explain my situation. Last month I shifted in one of your owned flat which is decorated with furniture and electrical equipment, however, from the beginning I found some of the furniture become old and turned into scrap. Though it appears that the last residents of the house used all furniture carefully, it has lost its temper for long used as the last tenant of the house lived in the house for almost ten years. As such, it is really difficult for me to use these anymore and therefore this furniture need to be replaced immediately. Would you kindly replace this furniture with new ones? I would much prefer if you took my wife while choosing and purchasing new furniture. As we are planning to live in this residence for a long tenure, it will be convenient for us if you pick new furniture according to our preference. Yours faithfully, Tahjib
Dear Mr. Smith,

My name is
Tahjib
, tenant of your apartment no. B/6, Ranking Street. I am writing to
let
you know that I am unhappy with the present condition of
some of the
furniture
which has
been provided
with the apartment. While
some of the
furniture
is
new
, few of the
furniture
became unusable and
unrepairable
at the same time. I hope you will consider my situation
favorably
.

Let
me
explain
my situation. Last month I shifted in one of your
owned
flat which
is decorated
with
furniture
and electrical equipment,
however
, from the beginning I found
some of the
furniture
become
old
and turned into scrap. Though it appears that the last residents of the
house
used
all
furniture
carefully
, it has lost its temper for long
used
as the last tenant of the
house
lived
in the
house
for almost ten years. As such, it is
really
difficult for me to
use
these anymore and
therefore
this
furniture
need to
be replaced
immediately.

Would you kindly replace this
furniture
with
new
ones? I would much prefer if you took my wife while choosing and purchasing
new
furniture
. As we are planning to
live
in this residence for a long tenure, it will be convenient for us if you pick
new
furniture
according to our preference.

Yours
faithfully
,

Tahjib
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IELTS letter You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
220 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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