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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to bring to your attention the faulty product that I have recently purchased from your company.

Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to bring to your attention the faulty product that I have recently purchased from your company. n09R
Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to bring to your attention the faulty product that I have recently purchased from your company. My name is Peter Mike and currently based in Brisbane. I am one of the satisfied and loyal customers of your company. I have been purchasing products from your esteemed organization for the last 10 years. A week ago, I bought a brand new camera from your store. It is highly recommended by the sales representative assigned to that particular section, hence I confidently purchased the product in spite of there are many substitutes available at marginally lesser price. Subsequently, as I found it to be a faulty for an unknown reason, I returned the camera on the same day requesting for a repair. It is been a week, no one from the store reached us to provide an update about the camera. I am disappointed with the lack of customer care and service provided to me. Thus, my request is to provide with the cash refund for the value of purchased item, and I have all the supporting documents such as invoice and receipt for the submission at the customer care center. I am looking forward to hearing a favorable response from you immediately. Yours faithfully, Peter Mike
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing this letter to bring to your attention the faulty product that I have recently
purchased
from your
company
.

My name is Peter Mike and
currently
based in Brisbane. I am one of the satisfied and loyal customers of your
company
. I have been purchasing products from your esteemed organization for the last 10 years.

A week ago, I
bought
a
brand new
camera from your store. It is
highly
recommended by the sales representative assigned to that particular section,
hence
I
confidently
purchased
the product
in spite of
there are
many
substitutes available at
marginally
lesser price.
Subsequently
, as I found it to be a faulty for an unknown reason, I returned the camera on the same day requesting for a repair. It
is been
a week, no one from the store reached us to provide an update about the camera.

I
am disappointed
with the lack of customer care and service provided to me.
Thus
, my request is to provide with the cash refund for the value of
purchased
item, and I have all the supporting documents such as invoice and receipt for the submission at the customer care center.

I am looking forward to hearing a favorable response from you immediately.

Yours
faithfully
,

Peter Mike
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam I am writing this letter to bring to your attention the faulty product that I have recently purchased from your company.

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
213 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
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