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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting your work Say what you want the shop or company to do

You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting your work Say what you want the shop or company to do Mgyo
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to bring your attention to a non-working situation happened to one of your products for home office. I bought a brand-new Canon laser printer a month ago from your website and I have been using it to print documents included marketing reports and consent forms. However, I found out that the ink is stuck within the machine, resulting in unable to print out text precisely and clearly. My job duties are providing my clients with detailed research reports and marketing plans of their intended investment projects, which neat and organized paper-based documents are essential to my presentations. Apparently, the problem has damaged my work performance. Following the maintains service instruction, I believe you could provide me with further details about where to get this product repaired, and how long this issue could be solved. I am looking forward to your reply. Let me know if any other information I should include. Sincerely, Jessica Lyn
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to bring your attention to a non-working situation happened to one of your products for home office.

I
bought
a brand-new Canon laser printer a month ago from your website and I have been using it to print documents included marketing reports and consent forms.
However
, I found out that the ink
is stuck
within the machine, resulting in unable to print out text
precisely
and
clearly
.

My job duties are providing my clients with detailed research reports and marketing plans of their intended investment projects, which neat and organized paper-based documents are essential to my presentations.
Apparently
, the problem has damaged my work performance.

Following the maintains service instruction, I believe you could provide me with
further
details
about where to
get
this product repaired, and how long this issue could
be solved
.

I am looking forward to your reply.
Let
me know if any other information I should include.

Sincerely
,

Jessica
Lyn
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IELTS letter You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter Describe the problem with the equipment Explain how this problem is affecting your work Say what you want the shop or company to do

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
160 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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