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You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment.Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter,

You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment. Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment. In your letter, LwNrr

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction of the printer that I have purchased from your company recently. I bought this devise two days ago and unfortunately when I tasted it at home I discovered that it doesn’t work properly. As I examine with several kinds of the paper this problem couldn’t be for paper. When I print my documents all of the letters were smashed and its computer system has a glitch. Since, I my work is from home it is such vital for me to have an high quality printer. Because it is impossible for me to go to the printer store every day. Moreover I am far away to this kind of the store. Could you please aware me about the way that I can change this device or process of refunding the money. In addition I want to remind you that I cannot come to your company. I wonder if you could send your staff to my home? Since my work is urgent I will appreciate you if respond me as soon as possible Yours faithfully

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction of the printer that I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 recently.

I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 this devise two days ago and unfortunately when I tasted it at home I discovered that it doesn’t work properly
. As I examine with several kinds of the paper this problem couldn’t be for paper. When I print my documents Consider using "all the".all the
all of the
 letters were smashed
 and its computer system has a glitch.

Since, I my work is from home it is such vital for me to have Use "a" instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'a
an
 high quality printer. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 it is impossible for me to go to the printer store every day. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?Moreover,
Moreover
 I am far away to this kind of the store.

Could you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 aware me about the way that I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 this device or process of refunding the money. In The comma is probably missing here: "addition, I".addition, I
addition I
 want to remind you that I cannot This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I wonder if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 your staff to my home?

Since my work is urgent I will appreciate you if respond me as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible

Yours faithfully