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You work as a part-time employee in a company. The company has recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this full-time job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, • introduce yourself and explain why you are writing • express your interest in having this full-time job • explain why you think you are a suitable candidate for the post

You work as a part-time employee in a company. The company has recently posted an advertisement seeking a person for a full-time position. You want to apply for this full-time job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, • introduce yourself and explain why you are writing • express your interest in having this full-time job • explain why you think you are a suitable candidate for the post pR5l0

Dear Sir, I am John Smith, working in your firm since last one and half year in production department as a part time employee. I am writing this letter in the response of the adverts which was published in yesterday’s news editorials. Currently, I am working in production department as a head of workers since last almost one and half year. Due to my academics I was unable to perform the full day work, since it is my last semester and then after my studies will be over, I would like to work with the same organization as a full time employee. As I am an international student, I entered into this company in year 2020. It was my first job and I am stick to it due to fact that I am quiet enjoying to do this task. Furthermore, being a Mechanical Engineer, production department is key aspect of everyone and thus I would like to work continue with this industry. Although, I am not at the senior level in this firm, still I can handle the over production period as well as demand from the clients. In addition to this, serving these much time in the same department, now I am very confident to deal with machinery and have a better knowledge than the one who will enter as a new comer in this firm. Hope you will consider my viewpoint and look for a positive reply from your side. Yours Sincerely, John Smith.

Dear Sir,

I am John Smith, working in your firm since last one and half year in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionofficeareaagencyadministrationcommission
department
 as a This word is normally spelled with hyphen.part-time
part time
 employee. I am writing this letter in the response of the adverts which was published
 in yesterday’s news editorials.

Currently
, I am working in You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionofficeareaagencyadministrationcommission
department
 as a head of workers since last almost one and half year. Due to my academics I was unable to perform the full day work, since it is my last semester and then after my studies will be over, I would like to work with the same organization as a full time employee. As I am an international student, I entered into this This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 in year 2020. It was my first
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job and
 I am stick to it due to fact that I am quiet The verb 'enjoying' is used with the gerund form: "enjoying doing".enjoying doing
enjoying to do
 this task. Furthermore
, being a Mechanical Engineer, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionofficeareaagencyadministrationcommission
department
 is key aspect of everyone and thus
 I would like to work continue with this industry.

Although, I am not at the senior level in this firm, still
 I can handle the over You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmanufacturemanagementconstructionmanufacturing
production
 period as well
 as demand from the clients. In addition
 to this, serving these much time in the same You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdivisionofficeareaagencyadministrationcommission
department
, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 confident to deal with machinery and have a better knowledge than the one who will enter as a Did you mean "newcomer"?newcomer
new comer
 in this firm.

Hope you will consider my viewpoint and look for a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 reply from your side.

Yours Sincerely
,

John Smith. 