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You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house. BJlV6
Dear Madison, Hello! How are you? Hope everything is great at your end. I am writing this letter to tell you the exciting news about our new house in Brooklyn. To begin with, the new house is located two streets from our old apartment. This brand new house has a huge indoor swimming pool. The construction of the house is a blend of traditional and contemporary work. The interiors are the most attractive part of the house. The house has four spacious bedrooms with attached bathrooms, a lounge, a private theatre for the family to binge-watch movies, and an extremely capacious kitchen. The color combinations given in each room are different and also they are soothing for the eyes. As you might know, the previous neighborhood was too clamorous and disturbing, but the new house has a beautiful view into the sea. It is calm and serene throughout the day and especially during the night with the slight whispering of the waves. There are few other houses similar to ours but all those are friendly individuals. We would be hosting a house warming party by next week and I would invite you to come down here and see the house and the location, am sure you will love it. Looking forward to seeing you soon. Lots of love, Vachana
Dear Madison,

Hello! How are you? Hope everything is great at your
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you the exciting
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about our
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house
in Brooklyn.

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with, the
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house
is located
two streets from our
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old
apartment. This brand
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new
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house
has a huge indoor swimming pool. The construction of the
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house
is a blend of traditional and contemporary work. The interiors are the most attractive part of the
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house
.
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The
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house
has four spacious bedrooms with attached bathrooms, a lounge, a private
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theatre
for the family to binge-
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watch
movies, and an
extremely
capacious kitchen.
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The
color combinations
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given
in each room are
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different
and
also
they are soothing for the eyes.

As you might know, the previous neighborhood was too clamorous and disturbing,
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but
the
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new
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house
has a
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beautiful
view into the sea. It is calm and serene throughout the day and
especially
during the night with the slight whispering of the waves. There are few other
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houses
similar to ours
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but
all those are friendly individuals.

We would be hosting a
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house warming
party by
next
week and I would invite you to
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come
down here and
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see
the
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house
and the location, am sure you will
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love
it.

Looking forward to seeing you
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soon
.

Lots of
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,

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Vachana
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IELTS letter You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news. Write to your friend. In the letter: • Describe the house. • Describe the neighbourhood. • Invite your friend to come and see the house.

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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