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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for

You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for kOEN
Dear Simran, I am good and Hope you are doing well. I was really happy to receive your letter last month. Thank you for the attached pictures. Anyway, I am writing this letter to give you a good news, that is, am moving to Krakow and will require your assistance to find an accommodation there. I was recently offered an opportunity to relocate by my manager. So, after having some discussion with Rashmi I accepted the offer. I have a period of 2 months to the wrap up all the work here and then i will move to your city. It would be great if you could shortlist some places that will be available at that time. Also, the area around the city center is preferable as it will reduce the travel time to office and is also well connected to other parts of the city via public transport. Due to some budget constraints I am thinking of a single bedroom flat with kitchen and a hall. Also, it should be well furnished as you know I don't like the packing and moving activities. I know you will be excited to hear this. It's the same here. Pay my regards to your family and hope to see you soon. ThanksRoyal Singh
Dear
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Simran
,

I am
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good
and Hope you are doing well. I was
really
happy to receive your letter last month. Thank you for the attached pictures. Anyway, I am writing this letter to give you a
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good
news,
that is
,
Did you mean "am I"?
am
moving to
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Krakow
and will require your assistance to find an accommodation there. I was recently offered an opportunity to relocate by my manager.
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So, after
having
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some
discussion with
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Rashmi
I
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accepted
the offer. I have a period of 2 months to the wrap up all the work here and then
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
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move
to your city. It would be great if you could shortlist
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some
places that will be available at that time.
Also
, the area around the city center is preferable as it will
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reduce
the travel time to office and is
also
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well connected
to other parts of the city via public transport. Due to
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
budget constraints I am thinking of a single bedroom flat with kitchen and a hall.
Also
, it should be well furnished as you know I don't like the packing and moving activities.

I know you will
be excited
to hear this. It's the same here. Pay my regards to your family and hope to
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see
you
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soon
.

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ThanksRoyal
Singh
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IELTS letter You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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