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You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: explain what you need say when you plan to be there ask for information about prices

You are going to take a short holiday in Singapore and you want to rent a holiday apartment while you are there. Write to the tourist information office. In your letter: explain what you need say when you plan to be there ask for information about prices pOEa

Dear Mr. Jee I am writing this letter to inquire about the packages for the apartment in the Orchard Lane or in the area. I’m looking for 2 bedroom with preferably 2 bathroom apartment which has a beautiful view and an easy access to trains and buses. I was advised by my friends who visited Singapore before to book apartment as it would be more convenient and economical. I’m visiting Singapore from March 21st to March 27th. But I need the apartment starting from March 21st till March 25th because the last two days we will be spending in bangkok. We shall reach Singapore from March 21st by 1100 hours and will directly move into the apartment. I would appreciate if you could send me all the details of the apartment including the cost, taxes and any other cost. If you could also include the pickup and drop off cost from the airport on March 21st and March 27th that would be really grateful. Looking forward to hear from you. Thank you so much. Yours faithfully, Udyan Luthra

Dear Mr. Possible spelling mistake found.SeeJoeLeeFeeJetBee
Jee


I am writing this letter to inquire about the packages for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 in the Orchard Lane or in the area. I’m looking for 2 bedroom with preferably
It appears that a hyphen is missing.2-bathroom
2 bathroom
Possible agreement error. The noun 'apartment' seems to be countable, so consider using: "apartments".apartments
apartment
 which has a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :gorgeousstunning
beautiful
 view and Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "easy access".easy access
an easy access
 to trains and buses. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was advised
 by my friends who visited Singapore This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 to book You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 as it would be more convenient and economical.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
’m visiting Singapore from March 21st to March 27th. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 I need the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 starting from March 21st till March 25th This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the last two days we will be spending in Possible spelling mistake found.Bangkok
bangkok
. We shall reach Singapore from March 21st by 1100 hours and will directly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 into the apartment.

I would appreciate if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me all the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withflatresidencecavesuiteaccommodationpenthouse
apartment
 including the cost, taxes and any other cost. If you could also
 include the pickup and drop off cost from the airport on March 21st and March 27th that would be really
 grateful.

Looking forward In the grammatical structure 'look + forward + to + verb', the verb 'to' is used with the gerund: "to hearing".to hearing
to hear
 from you. Thank you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much.

Yours faithfully
,

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Udyan
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Luthra