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letter to you to complain about

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing a letter to you to complain about your supporting services and explain what had happened when I purchased a dishwasher. RecentIy I bought a dishwasher from your shopping market. but when I turned on it is not work properly. Actually, after finishing time and when time is over when I Opened the door all dish still dirty. Seemingly, I complately do according to the instructions. After that I called your supporting service. The answering mashin responded to me. I put the message and described about my problem. I tought my request was proceeding but no body had called. I have a request from you. Please trace my request and respond immidiately what happened and why my request is not answered untill now. I will demand you to properly respond me, and as soon as possible my problem will finish. I am waiting for your responses, and I hope you will have a good news for me. Yours faithfully Amin Marghzari
Dear Sir or Madam

I am writing a letter to you to complain about your supporting services and
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explain
what had happened when I
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purchased
a dishwasher.

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RecentIy
I
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bought
a dishwasher from your shopping market.
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but
when I turned on it is not work
properly
. Actually, after finishing time and when time is over when I Opened the door all dish
still
dirty.
Seemingly
, I
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complately
do according to the instructions.

“After” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
After
that I called your supporting service. The answering
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mashin
responded to me. I put the message and
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described
about my problem.
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I tought
my
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request
was proceeding
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but
Did you mean "nobody"?
no body
had called.

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I
have a
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request
from you.
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Please
trace my
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request
and respond
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immidiately
what happened and why my
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request
is not answered
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untill
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now
. I will demand you to
properly
respond me, and as
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soon
as possible my problem will finish.

I am waiting for your responses, and I hope you will have a
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good
news for me.

Yours
faithfully


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Amin
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Marghzari
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IELTS letter letter to you to complain about

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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