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ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for

ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for KDqN
Dear Pooja, Swati, Divya, Hope you all are fine. I am also fine here. Its been so long since we saw each other. I still remember the summer break we spent together at my place in Mysore. We had a lot of fun together. I really wish we spend some time this year too. I am writing this letter to inform you that I have got a new job and I am moving to Hyderabad next month, So need your help to find accomodation for me and my husband in Hyderabad. My office is in Gachibowli, Hyderabad and I would prefer a single room in a flat with attached washroom. Moreover, flat can be 2BHK or 3BHK with a modern kitchen where we can cook by ourselves. It would be great if it will be directly from owner and not from broker. Room should not be much expensive. In addition to that, it should be walking distance to IT park. I would be very happy to meet you all after a long break. Hope we will have a good time together. Looking forward to meet you all very soon. Give my regards to Uncle and aunt. Yours SincerelyRashmi Malhotra
Dear
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Pooja
,
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Swati
, Divya,

Hope you all are fine. I am
also
fine here.
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been
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so
long since we
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saw
each other. I
still
remember the summer break we spent together at my place in Mysore. We had
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a lot of
fun together. I
really
wish we spend
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some
time this year too.

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have
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got
a new
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job and
I am moving to Hyderabad
next
month,
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So
need your
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help
to find
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accomodation
for me and my husband in Hyderabad.

My office is in
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Gachibowli
, Hyderabad and I would prefer a single room in a flat with attached washroom.
Moreover
, flat can be 2BHK or 3BHK with a modern kitchen where we can cook by ourselves. It would be great if it will be
directly
from owner and not from broker. Room should not be much expensive.
In addition
to that, it should be walking distance to IT park.

I would be
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very
happy to
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meet
you all after a long break. Hope we will have a
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good
time together. Looking forward to
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meet
you all
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very
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soon
. Give my regards to Uncle and aunt.

Yours
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SincerelyRashmi
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Malhotra
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IELTS letter ou should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You will move to a new city for work. You know some people who live there. Ask them for help finding accommodation Tell them where you would like to live Tell them the type of place you are looking for

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  American English
6 paragraphs
198 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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