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Write an video conversation about your educational background and motivation

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Hello, I am Nesibe Özer. I would like to start with my educational background. I graduated from the Yalova University from the business administration department. And I took some courses which are related Marihe program. Such as strategic management, strategic human resources, invention and innovation. Then, I also often worked to complete presentations with my classmates and actually, my best academic presentation experience was at the international conference of business students, which is about our research stud and I supposed that it will be published in a month. After all of these, my abroad experience was started with a language school in London. Then, I was an Erasmus student in Slovenia. Also, during my study, I had some experiences about software programs such as SPSS and R Studio. That’s why I applied an open university about web design and coding. I would like to share with some of my motivation. I have a dream of studying abroad, but it is not only one. One of the reasons which is pushing me to apply for this program a specialization area with a global version. Studying in Marihe, I would be able to synthesize some different countries which have a different economic profile. Become an academician is my age-long ambition. For that reason, I believe that it is the most beneficial program for me and that's my other motivation reason. A few years ago, the Erasmus program affected me deeply because It gave me both academic and life education. Even now, it is one of my reasons for the participation of Marihe. As Erasmus slogan ONCE ERASMUS ALWAYS ERASMUS. I would like to hear good news from you.
Hello, I am
Nesibe
Özer
. I would like to
start
with my educational background. I graduated from the
Yalova
University from the business administration department. And I took
some
courses which
are related
Marihe
program
. Such as strategic management, strategic human resources, invention and innovation. Then, I
also
often
worked to complete presentations with my classmates and actually, my best academic presentation experience was at the international conference of business students, which is about our research stud and I supposed that it will
be published
in a month.
After all
of these, my abroad experience was
started
with a language school in London. Then, I was an Erasmus student in Slovenia.
Also
, during my study, I had
some
experiences about software
programs
such as
SPSS
and R Studio. That’s why I applied an open university about web design and coding.

I would like to share with
some
of my motivation. I have a dream of studying abroad,
but
it is not
only
one. One of the
reasons
which is pushing me to apply for this
program
a specialization area with a global version. Studying in
Marihe
, I would be able to synthesize
some
different
countries which have a
different
economic profile. Become an academician is my age-long ambition. For that
reason
, I believe that it is the most beneficial
program
for me and that's my other motivation
reason
. A few years ago, the Erasmus
program
affected
me
deeply
because
It gave me both academic and life education. Even
now
, it is one of my
reasons
for the participation of
Marihe
. As Erasmus slogan ONCE ERASMUS ALWAYS ERASMUS. I would like to hear
good
news from you.
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IELTS letter Write an video conversation about your educational background and motivation

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  American English
2 paragraphs
276 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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