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write a letter o your friend in foreign country, write that you are planning a holiday . write in your letter that why you are planning this trip what are your plans for it ask your friend to join you for the holiday

write a letter o your friend in foreign country, write that you are planning a holiday. write in your letter that why you are planning this trip what are your plans for it ask your friend to join you for the holiday 7aPOy
I HOPE YOU AND YOIUR FAMILY IS DOING WELL. IT IS BEEN LONGTIME SINCE WE HAVE NOT SEEN EACHOTHER. I WAS THINKING TO PLAN A TRIP TO REDUCE MY WORK STRESS. I AM HAVING A LOT OF WORK LOAD AT JOB SO THIS WILL BE A MUCH NEEDED BREAK. SO THAT I CAN FRESHEN UP MY SELF AND CONCENTRATE ON MY WORK EFFICIENTLY. THIS IS WHY I HAVE DECIDED TO VISITE CANADA. I HAVE PLANNED TO COME TO CANADA ON 12 OCTOBER FROM INDIA. T WILL BE REACHED THERE ON 13 OCTOBER EVENING AT 5 PM. I HAVE PLANNED TO STAY WITH YOU FOR A WEEK, MEANWHILE WE CAN EXPLORE THE CANADA. WE CAN GO TO SEE A VERY KNOWN PLACE CALLED ZOO. I HAVE HEARED THAT IT HAS DIVERSITY IN ANIMAL SPIECES. ALSO WE CAN GO TO SEE NIAGRA FALL IN TORONTO AS THIS IS THE FALL SEASON SO, THE SCENERIO WILL BE A AMAZING AT FALL. THEN FOR THE NEXT ONE WEEK I HAVE PLANNED TO VISITE ALBERTA MY AUNT'S PLACE. I WOULD BE AGREAT IF YOU WILL ABLE TO JOINE ME FOR THIS TRIP. AS WE CAN HAVE AN OPPORTUNITY TO SPEND SOMETIME TO WITH EACHOTHER AND ENJOY. ALSO IT WOULD BE NICE IF YOU COME TO ALBERTA WITH ME. YOU WILL HAVE CHANCE TO TASTE THE AUTHENTIC INDIAN FOOD WHICH MY AUNT COOKS. I WILL BE WAITING FOR YOUR POSITIVE RESPONSE. SEE YOU SOON THERE. WITH BEST REGARDS SEFALI PATEL
I HOPE YOU AND
YOIUR
FAMILY IS DOING WELL. IT
IS BEEN
LONGTIME SINCE WE HAVE NOT
SEEN
EACHOTHER
. I WAS THINKING TO PLAN A TRIP TO
REDUCE
MY WORK
STRESS
. I AM HAVING
A LOT OF
WORK LOAD AT JOB
SO
THIS WILL BE A MUCH NEEDED BREAK.
SO
THAT I CAN FRESHEN UP MY SELF AND CONCENTRATE ON MY WORK
EFFICIENTLY
. THIS IS WHY I HAVE DECIDED TO
VISITE
CANADA.

I HAVE PLANNED TO
COME
TO CANADA ON 12 OCTOBER FROM INDIA. T WILL
BE REACHED
THERE ON 13 OCTOBER EVENING AT 5 PM. I HAVE PLANNED TO STAY WITH YOU FOR A WEEK, MEANWHILE WE CAN EXPLORE THE CANADA. WE CAN GO TO
SEE
A
VERY KNOWN
PLACE CALLED ZOO. I HAVE
HEARED
THAT IT HAS DIVERSITY IN
ANIMAL SPIECES
.
ALSO
WE CAN GO TO
SEE
NIAGRA
FALL IN TORONTO AS THIS IS
THE FALL SEASON
SO
, THE
SCENERIO
WILL BE A AMAZING AT FALL. THEN FOR THE
NEXT
ONE WEEK I HAVE PLANNED TO
VISITE
ALBERTA MY AUNT'S PLACE.

I WOULD BE
AGREAT
IF YOU WILL ABLE TO
JOINE
ME FOR THIS TRIP. AS WE CAN HAVE AN OPPORTUNITY TO SPEND SOMETIME TO WITH
EACHOTHER
AND ENJOY.
ALSO
IT WOULD BE NICE IF YOU
COME
TO ALBERTA WITH ME. YOU WILL HAVE CHANCE TO TASTE THE AUTHENTIC INDIAN FOOD WHICH MY AUNT COOKS.

I WILL BE WAITING FOR YOUR
POSITIVE
RESPONSE.
SEE
YOU
SOON
THERE.

WITH BEST REGARDS

SEFALI
PATEL
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IELTS letter write a letter o your friend in foreign country, write that you are planning a holiday. write in your letter that why you are planning this trip what are your plans for it ask your friend to join you for the holiday

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
243 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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