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You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.

You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. eqB7
Dear Ravi, This is Praveen from India. I hope everything goes very well mannered. As you know that I am travelling for Canada soon about my work programme over there however, I just want to enquiry about my accomodation details where you have been provided. So I am looking for very nice and well resort with nice fecilities where ever I have been and probably it should be near to my work location because as you know I have to be in location around one year so I am requesting you to provide all comfortable resources and make sure to think effectively about my room sharing partners with very much good fecilities to move over there. If you are not been provided all these resources well mannered otherwise probably it will be very much difficult to me to stay over there. So, here finally I clearly explained you everything about my living style and daily usual liking habits about so please ensure that try to place everything in effective manner with less cost. So, I hope you definitely reach my level what I expected into. Here, is the contact number which you contact through 98xxxxxxxx. I await to hear your response soon in positive manner. Yours faithfully, Praveen.
Dear Ravi, This is Praveen from India. I hope everything goes
very
well mannered
. As you know that I am travelling for Canada
soon
about my work
programme
over there
however
, I
just
want to
enquiry
about my
accomodation
details
where you have
been provided
.

So
I am looking for
very
nice and well resort with nice
fecilities
where ever I have been and
probably
it should be near to my work location
because
as you know I
have to
be in location around one year
so
I am requesting you to provide all comfortable resources and
make
sure to
think
effectively
about my room sharing partners with
very
much
good
fecilities
to
move
over there. If you are not
been provided
all these resources
well mannered
otherwise
probably
it will be
very
much
difficult to me
to stay over there.

So
, here
finally
I
clearly
explained
you everything about my living style and daily usual liking habits about
so
please
ensure that try to place everything in effective manner with less cost.
So
, I hope you definitely reach my level what I
expected
into. Here, is the contact number which you contact through 98xxxxxxxx.

I await to hear your response
soon
in
positive
manner.

Yours
faithfully
, Praveen.
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IELTS letter You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
208 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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