Search
Vocabularying
Listening
Reading
1. Academic
2. General
Writing
1. IELTSWriting Checker
2. IELTS Writing Samples
Speaking

Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.

You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.

You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. eqB7

Dear Ravi, This is Praveen from India. I hope everything goes very well mannered. As you know that I am travelling for Canada soon about my work programme over there however, I just want to enquiry about my accomodation details where you have been provided. So I am looking for very nice and well resort with nice fecilities where ever I have been and probably it should be near to my work location because as you know I have to be in location around one year so I am requesting you to provide all comfortable resources and make sure to think effectively about my room sharing partners with very much good fecilities to move over there. If you are not been provided all these resources well mannered otherwise probably it will be very much difficult to me to stay over there. So, here finally I clearly explained you everything about my living style and daily usual liking habits about so please ensure that try to place everything in effective manner with less cost. So, I hope you definitely reach my level what I expected into. Here, is the contact number which you contact through 98xxxxxxxx. I await to hear your response soon in positive manner. Yours faithfully, Praveen.

Dear Ravi, This is Praveen from India. I hope everything goes This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-mannered
well mannered
. As you know that I am travelling for Canada This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 about my work Possible spelling mistake. 'programme' is British English.program
programme
 over there however
, I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 want to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquiry' is British English.inquiry
enquiry
 about my Possible spelling mistake found.accommodation
accomodation
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 where you have been provided
.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 I am looking for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 nice and well resort with nice Possible spelling mistake found.facilities
fecilities
 where ever I have been and probably
 it should be near to my work location This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 as you know I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be in location around one year This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I am requesting you to provide all comfortable resources and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 sure to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
effectively
 about my room sharing partners with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
Possible spelling mistake found.facilities
fecilities
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 over there. If you are not been provided
 all these resources This word is normally spelled with hyphen.well-mannered
well mannered
otherwise
probably
 it will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much The usual preposition to follow "difficult" is 'for" when followed by a pronoun. "Difficult" and "to" only appear together when "to" forms part of an infinitive structure.  Did you mean "difficult for me"?difficult for me
difficult to me
 to stay over there.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, here finally
 I clearly
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpreted
explained
 you everything about my living style and daily usual liking habits about This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 ensure that try to place everything in effective manner with less cost. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, I hope you definitely reach my level what I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 into. Here, is the contact number which you contact through 98xxxxxxxx.

I await to hear your response This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 in This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 manner.

Yours faithfully
, Praveen. 