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One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advise him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.

One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advise him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary. VobQ
Dear Frankie, I'm so glad to know that you wanted to improve your English before relocating to Sydney. Being a true friend, I'd like to give some suggestions to you to improve your listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary. Firstly, as you know listening skills are the most important part of communication. If I were you, I'd enrol in a short-term course in a school. I think this would provide you with a good practice of listening to people and understanding different accents. Joining a course in a school could prove to be useful in improving other ways too. It'll provide an opportunity for you to speak in front of strangers and people from different parts of the world. The mentors and teachers would provide unbiased feedback on your speaking skills and would help in correcting the mistakes which you might not have observed yourself. If I were you, I'd get myself enrolled in an English community group on social media too, where students and professional from all over the world come together and discuss a topic daily. At last, practice is the only key to master a language. Don't forget catching up with vocabulary. I'd advise you to read more, books or newspapers, depending on your choice. You'd better choose five words daily from the articles you read and practice making five to six sentences on your own. Hope my advice would help you. Do write about it. All the best, Neha
Dear Frankie,

I'm
so
glad to know that you wanted to
improve
your English
before
relocating to Sydney. Being a true friend, I'd like to give
some
suggestions to you to
improve
your listening
skills
, speaking
skills
and vocabulary.

Firstly
, as you know listening
skills
are the most
important
part of communication. If I were you, I'd enrol in a short-term course in a school. I
think
this would provide you with a
good
practice of listening to
people
and understanding
different
accents. Joining a course in a school could prove to be useful in improving other ways too.

It'll provide an opportunity for you to speak in front of strangers and
people
from
different
parts of the world. The mentors and teachers would provide unbiased feedback on your speaking
skills
and would
help
in correcting the mistakes which you might not have observed yourself. If I were you, I'd
get
myself enrolled in an English community group on social media too, where students and professional from all over the world
come
together and discuss a topic daily. At last, practice is the
only
key to master a language.

Don't forget catching up with vocabulary. I'd advise you to read more, books or newspapers, depending on your choice. You'd better choose
five


words
daily from the articles you read and practice making five to six sentences on your
own
.

Hope my advice would
help
you. Do write about it.

All the best,

Neha
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IELTS letter One of your penfriends wants to improve his/her English in advance of moving to Sydney. Write a letter to your penfriend. Advise him/her about the following: listening skills, speaking skills and vocabulary.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
242 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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