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international magazine about the complain news of your town

international magazine about the complain news of your town bJwg
Dear Sir, The objective of writing this letter is to let you know about the concern regarding about an article number 7 that is published recently in your global travel journal. The write-up on first page of the magazine, heading related to the ABC town hospital management services, which are not properly maintained as per your report. Main reason to clarify my point is that the town management recently upgraded their facilities in different medical care units, In addition, more equipments are conveniently available for patients. Moreover, inhabitants of different societies prefer to read your paper instead of other publishers. Therefore, it is vitally important to write accurate news. Otherwise, the outcome of people imaginations will impact negatively on growth of our district. It is my humble request to monitor it closely. Furthermore, if possible so re-publish the same article accordingly in favor. Yours Faithfully, XYZ
Dear Sir,

The objective of writing this letter is to
let
you know about the concern regarding about an article number 7 that
is published
recently in your global travel journal. The write-up on
first
page of the magazine, heading related to the ABC town hospital management services, which are not
properly
maintained as per your report.

Main reason to clarify my point is that the town management recently upgraded their facilities in
different
medical care units,
In addition
, more equipments are
conveniently
available for patients.
Moreover
, inhabitants of
different
societies prefer to read your paper
instead
of other publishers.
Therefore
, it is
vitally
important
to write accurate news.
Otherwise
, the outcome of
people
imaginations will impact
negatively
on growth of our district.

It is my humble request to monitor it
closely
.
Furthermore
, if possible
so
re-publish the same article
accordingly
in favor.

Yours
Faithfully
,

XYZ
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IELTS letter international magazine about the complain news of your town

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
145 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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