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A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons

A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons QYOy

Dear William, Firstly, Thanking you very much for inviting your kid birthday party and also I wish many more happy returns to your daughter a very advanced. l hope you are doing good. In this letter I would draw your attention towards understanding of my concern regarding not to accept the invitation coming from you. Be think in broad way the main issue why I am not suppose to attend for that invitation even I like so, because as you knew that I am completely busy with my work schedule and I almost don't have any time sheets as free to get rid of these regular kind of work and add on to that specially, on that particular day I got an important appointment with one of my client to give demonstration about our products. So, this is the reason why I missed out the opportunity that great time that going to be spend with you. I really feels very bad in this moment but as a friend you will definitely understand our work problems. So once again wish u a very happy birthday to your daughter stay blessed and God give her long life ahead and sorry for not attend and finally saying thanking you for remembering me and got to invite for birthday occasion it's been alot to me. I hope you could get it and waiting for positive response from your end. Yours lovingly, Praveen.

Dear William,

Firstly
, Thanking you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 much for inviting your kid birthday party and also
 I wish This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
 more happy returns to your daughter a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 advanced. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterL
l
 hope you are doing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
. In this letter I would draw your attention towards understanding of my concern regarding not to accept the invitation coming from you.

Be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 in broad way the main issue why I am not Consider using a past participle here: "supposed".supposed
suppose
 to attend for that invitation even I like This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 as you knew that I am completely busy with my work schedule and I almost don't have any time sheets as free to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 rid of these regular kind of work and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrue
add
 on to that specially
, on that particular day I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 appointment with one of my client to give demonstration about our products. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, this is the reason why I missed out the opportunity that great time that going to be Consider using a past participle here: "spent".spent
spend
 with you. I really
 feels This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
The usual collocation for "this moment" is "at" not "in". Did you mean "At this moment"?At this moment
in this moment
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 as a friend you will definitely understand our work problems.

This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
 once again wish u a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 happy birthday to your daughter stay blessed and God give her long life ahead and sorry for not attend and finally
 saying thanking you for remembering me and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 to invite for birthday occasion it's been Possible spelling mistake found.a lotlotplotslotaltoaloft
alot
 to me.

I hope you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it and waiting for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:beneficial
positive
 response from your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
.

Yours lovingly
, Praveen. 