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You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.

You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. 87Rx

Dear Sir/mam, I have seen your advertisement in magazine 'THE TIME OF INDIA'. I had gone through the services your agency has provided to the international students. So, i want to enquire about the facilities because i want to make an appointment with you. i will be arrived in your city by next month. one of my friend suggests me that your company is one of the famous company all over the world as she is your daily customers. I came to know that you are delivering the good living services on reasonable costs. i'm looking for the single flat with attached kitchen, balcony and bathroom. my college is located in main city. It should be fruitful for me if the flat is nearly located to my institue. on the other side, the flat should including the household accessories. if u have the flats available please send me the details on my email. my email address is oscar2G@gmail. com. I will be happy to paying my all the payments for the flat. mans raj, 0993736893

Dear Sir/mam, I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 your advertisement in magazine 'THE TIME OF INDIA'. I had gone through the services your agency has provided to the international students. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to Possible spelling mistake. 'enquire' is British English.inquire
enquire
 about the facilities This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 an appointment with you. Did you mean "I"?I
i
 will be arrived
 in your city by next
 month. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOne
one
 of my friend suggests me that your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is one of the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 all over the world as she is your daily customers. I came to know that you are delivering the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 living services on reasonable costs. Did you mean "I'm"?I'm
i'm
 looking for the single You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhorizontalunbrokenlowempty
flat
 with attached kitchen, balcony and bathroom. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
 college is located
 in main city. It should be fruitful for me if the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhorizontalunbrokenlowempty
flat
 is nearly
 located to my Possible spelling mistake found.institute
institue
. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterOn
on
 the other side, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhorizontalunbrokenlowempty
flat
 should The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "include"include
including
 the household accessories. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterIf
if
 u have the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhorizontalunbrokenlowempty
flats
 available This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 me the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 on my email. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterMy
my
 email address is oscar2G@gmail. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterCom
com
. I will be happy to paying my all the payments for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withhorizontalunbrokenlowempty
flat
. 'mans' refers to the verb 'man' meaning take command of something. Did you mean "men" or "man's"?menman's
mans
Possible spelling mistake found.RAJRajranrawrayRay
raj
, 0993736893