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You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.

You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation. 87Rx
Dear Sir/mam, I have seen your advertisement in magazine 'THE TIME OF INDIA'. I had gone through the services your agency has provided to the international students. So, i want to enquire about the facilities because i want to make an appointment with you. i will be arrived in your city by next month. one of my friend suggests me that your company is one of the famous company all over the world as she is your daily customers. I came to know that you are delivering the good living services on reasonable costs. i'm looking for the single flat with attached kitchen, balcony and bathroom. my college is located in main city. It should be fruitful for me if the flat is nearly located to my institue. on the other side, the flat should including the household accessories. if u have the flats available please send me the details on my email. my email address is oscar2G@gmail. com. I will be happy to paying my all the payments for the flat. mans raj, 0993736893
Dear Sir/mam, I have
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seen
your advertisement in magazine 'THE TIME OF INDIA'. I had gone through the services your agency has provided to the international students.
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So
,
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
want to
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enquire
about the facilities
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because
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
want to
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make
an appointment with you.
Did you mean "I"?
i
will
be arrived
in your city by
next
month.
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one
of my friend suggests me that your
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company
is one of the
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famous
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company
all over the world as she is your daily customers. I came to know that you are delivering the
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good
living services on reasonable costs.
Did you mean "I'm"?
i'm
looking for the single
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flat
with attached kitchen, balcony and bathroom.
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my
college
is located
in main city. It should be fruitful for me if the
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flat
is
nearly
located to my
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institue
.
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on
the other side, the
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flat
should
The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: "include"
including
the household accessories.
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if
u have the
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flats
available
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please
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send
me the
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details
on my email.
This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
my
email address is oscar2G@gmail.
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com
. I will be happy to paying my all the payments for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
flat
.
'mans' refers to the verb 'man' meaning take command of something. Did you mean "men" or "man's"?
mans
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raj
, 0993736893
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IELTS letter You will go to a foreign country to stay there for one year, and you need a place to live in. You have decided to write to an agency for accommodation.

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  American English
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5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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