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You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely dissatisfied with the experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Explain the reason for the celebration Give details of your visit to the restaurant Say what you would like the restaurant to do Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely dissatisfied with the experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Explain the reason for the celebration Give details of your visit to the restaurant Say what you would like the restaurant to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam, L2Kp
From, Prameela Mary P No 124 Big bridge Red cross LondonTo, The manger Hotty restaurant East coast London Respected sir/madam, subject: Complaint letter regarding the taste of the dish and customer service of your restaurant. I'm Prameela from London, Last night I have booked a table at your restaurant for my friend Priya's birthday party. I suggest your restaurant to my friends to celebrate my friend's birthday party. Consequently, I have order food for 20 members. However, I disappointed with your service, hardly, we were waited for 30 minutes to get the order. For instance, Although We have planned to celebrate the party at 12 clocks, I received my food at 12: 30 pm. Secondly, the taste of the food was annoying with better taste and the customer service is not satisfied at all. Additionally, I have paid 10% of the tax for customer service, which is much higher when compared with other restaurants. In my opinion, I suggest that you can improve better customer service with the correct time. Moreover, the physical infrastructure of the restaurant can be modified to cover the customers. Provide a good starter like soup, or lemon juice prior to the meals, and at the end, it is good to finish with the sweets or ice cream. Thank you your's faithfully Prameela Mary22/02/21London
From,
Prameela
Mary P No 124
Big
bridge Red cross
LondonTo
, The manger
Hotty
restaurant
East coast London Respected sir/madam, subject: Complaint letter regarding the taste of the dish and
customer
service
of your
restaurant
. I'm
Prameela
from London, Last night I have booked a table at your
restaurant
for my friend Priya's birthday party. I suggest your
restaurant
to my friends to celebrate my friend's birthday party.
Consequently
, I have order food for 20 members.
However
, I disappointed with your
service
, hardly, we
were waited
for 30 minutes to
get
the order.
For instance
, Although We have planned to celebrate the party at 12 clocks, I received my food at 12: 30 pm.
Secondly
, the taste of the food was annoying with better taste and the
customer
service
is not satisfied at all.
Additionally
, I have paid 10% of the tax for
customer
service
, which is much higher when compared with other
restaurants
. In my opinion, I suggest that you can
improve
better
customer
service
with the correct time.
Moreover
, the physical infrastructure of the
restaurant
can
be modified
to cover the
customers
. Provide a
good
starter like soup, or lemon juice prior to the meals, and at the
end
, it is
good
to finish with the sweets or ice cream. Thank you
your's
faithfully
Prameela
Mary22/02/21London
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IELTS letter You and your friends ate a meal at a restaurant to celebrate a special occasion, and you were extremely dissatisfied with the experience. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. In your letter: Explain the reason for the celebration Give details of your visit to the restaurant Say what you would like the restaurant to do You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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