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You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation 3GrY
Dear Sir or Madam, A couple of weeks ago, your popular international travel magazine, in its 250th edition, published an article about my hometown in an effort to provide a bit more exposure to the travel-related activities in it. Well, while I appreciate this noble effort of yours, I regret to inform you that there is a factual error in your article that requires immediate correction. In fact, your article in question says that the migratory birds visit our town during the month of April while the correct information is that they start to visit our hometown from early February. By the way, correcting this information on your magazine is extremely critical for the livelihood of a plethora of people in my hometown due to the fact they heavily rely on the tourist spending of the visitors who come to visit our town in order to see these migratory birds. Therefore, I would like to request you to please issue a correctional notice in your magazine’s next publication about the previous mistake consequently that the prospective tourists don’t get confused about the timing of the migratory birds’ visit to my hometown. Thank you for your consideration in advance. Yours faithfully, Antonio Perez
Dear Sir or Madam,

A couple of weeks ago, your popular international travel magazine, in its 250th edition, published an article about my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hometown
in an effort to provide a bit more exposure to the travel-related activities in it. Well, while I appreciate this noble effort of yours, I regret to inform you that there is a factual error in your article that requires immediate correction.

In fact, your article in question says that the migratory birds
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
our town during the month of April while the correct information is that they
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
start
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hometown
from early February. By the way, correcting this information on your magazine is
extremely
critical for the livelihood of a plethora of
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
in my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hometown
due to the fact they
heavily
rely on the tourist spending of the visitors who
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
to
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
our town in order to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
these migratory birds.

Therefore
, I would like to request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
issue a correctional notice in your magazine’s
next
publication about the previous mistake
consequently
that the prospective tourists don’t
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
get
confused about the timing of the migratory birds’
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
visit
to my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
hometown
. Thank you for your consideration in advance.

Yours
faithfully
,

Antonio Perez
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IELTS letter You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter: correct the information in the article explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information suggest what the magazine should do about this situation

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201 words
6.5
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