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You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend

You recently went to a public event (for example an exhibition, festival, or show) that you think your friend would enjoy. Write a letter to friend gd9a

Dear Manik, After a long time I am writing you a letter, hope you are fine and everyone at your place are good too. I know you will be also worried about me as we haven’t talked for long but now here I am. Actually, I was so excited to tell you about many things, but firstly about the most recent event. Like yesterday I went to books exhibition (Type of exhibition). There were many of many books; there were different types of novels, fictions, fantasy world stories etc. I started going through with their names and a little bit of idea; you also know how much I like these types of exhibitions. I loved the poetry books there were many books of my favorite writers especially Manik. I still remember those school/college time days when we sit together in break time and instead of doing lunch we use to read some exciting books. I missed you so much I just hope that we will recall those memories together again soon. I brought some books for you too. So this was what I wanted to share with you and there is a lot more for that you’ll have to come soon. My all good wishes are with you. Regards, Manik

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Manik
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Manik
.

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have to
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come
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.

My all This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 wishes are with you.

Regards,

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Manik