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You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter say who you are give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter say who you are give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents E37lq
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter in connection to the accident that happened yesterday in front of your supermarket. I am Jatinder, lives just three blocks away from the market. I visit there very often, almost twice a week for shopping of necessity goods. Let me explain the situation, I was coming out from the front door of the market and passing the road to the parking space to get to my car. I had the trolly in my hand full of groceries and suddenly a car hit it and damage the trolly. The vehicle could have hit me, and I heard this type of incidents happened before with others. I would like to suggest some measures to avoid this kind of situations. Firstly, please try to construct some bumpers on the road to slow down the vehicles. Secondly, there are only two pedestrian marking on the road and no stop signs for the cars. Kindly paint some markings in front of each door and try to put stop signs. Thanks in advance for your consideration. Best regards. Jatinder.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter in connection to the accident that happened yesterday in front of your supermarket. I am
Jatinder
,
lives
just
three blocks away from the market.
I
visit there
very
often
, almost twice a week for shopping of necessity
goods
.

Let
me
explain
the situation, I was coming out from the front door of the market and passing the road to the parking space to
get
to my car. I had the
trolly
in my hand full of groceries and
suddenly
a car hit it and damage the
trolly
. The vehicle could have hit me, and I heard this type of incidents happened
before
with others.

I would like to suggest
some
measures to avoid this kind of situations.
Firstly
,
please
try to construct
some
bumpers on the road to slow down the vehicles.
Secondly
, there are
only
two pedestrian marking on the road and no
stop
signs for the cars. Kindly paint
some
markings in front of each door and try to put
stop
signs.

Thanks in advance for your consideration.

Best regards.

Jatinder
.
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IELTS letter You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket. In your letter say who you are give details about the accident suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents

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  American English
7 paragraphs
182 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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