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a letter to a friend to care for your pet

a letter to a friend to care for your pet rLaXn

Dear Jet, I will be going to visit my grandmother this weekend and I am very grateful that you agreed to look after my cat Miru. In case you have any questions about my pet’s care instructions, feel free to call me on this number, 09053300313. My cat’s care routine is quite simple. She needs to be fed twice a day. First is at around 5am and the second would be around 7pm. You can give her treats in between those hours. You don’t need to bathe her as she can do it for herself. She is potty trained so that will not be a problem for you. You just need to clear the litter box at the end of the day. Aside from taking care of Miru, kindly keep all areas of the unit clean. All the cleaning materials are inside the storage room which is beside the bathroom. The garbage needs to be brought to the 12th floor before 6pm. Again, if you need to contact me, please do so. I will be keeping my lines open all day. See you in 2 days. Yours sincerely, Sophia

Dear Jet,

I will be going to visit my grandmother this Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).weekend, and
weekend and
 I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 grateful that you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to look after my cat Possible spelling mistake found.MirMiraMIRVMiroMireMiry
Miru
. In case you have any questions about my pet’s care instructions, feel free to call me on this number, 09053300313.

My cat’s care routine is quite simple. She You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
needs
 to be fed
 twice a day. First
 is at around 5am and the second would be around 7pm. You can give her treats in between those hours. You don’t You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to bathe her as she can do it for herself. She is potty trained This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that will not be a problem for you. You This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 the litter box at the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the day.

Aside from taking care of Possible spelling mistake found.MirMiraMIRVMiroMireMiry
Miru
, kindly This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 all areas of the unit clean. All the cleaning materials are inside the storage room which is beside the bathroom. The garbage You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
needs
 to be brought
 to the 12th floor This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 6pm.

Again, if you You use this word too often, consider replacing it withuserightwishcommitmentdemandobligation
need
 to contact me, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 do This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
. I will be keeping my lines open all day. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
See
 you in 2 days.

Yours sincerely
,

Sophia