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I have the magnificent pleasure in writing the letter of recommendation for Mr. Yirgalem Gidey, who was my student and currently an employee of an Information Network and Security Agency.

I have the magnificent pleasure in writing the letter of recommendation for Mr. Yirgalem Gidey, who was my student and currently an employee of an Information Network and Security Agency. Kwlp3
I have the magnificent pleasure in writing the letter of recommendation for Mr. Yirgalem Gidey, who was my student and currently an employee of an Information Network and Security Agency. He has completed his five years of study in Information Technology (Engineering) successfully. I know him since he was a first year an undergraduate student. During his stay, I learned his diligence, motivation, learn to think critically in an innovative manner. Yirgalem is careful and creative thinker with an eye for details and a devotion to logic, which serves him well both in the sciences and outside them. He has the terrific ability to draw on his own experiences and observations to develop thoughtful opinions on a variety of issues. In addition, he joined the department of Cyber Security Research Division with the rank of Exploit Tool Researcher has been showing his perseverance and impressive communication skills during his stay in Information Network and Security Agency. During his stay, he has shown keen interest and commitment in the Projects given successfully. His ability to learn quickly and flexibility has been stunned me in Automating Evasion of Antivirus Scanners, Crypters, Binders and overall malware development using different techniques as well. I found him as an intellectual who grasps new concepts quickly and accepts construction criticism and instruction concerning his work. Yirgalem is accurate and meticulous in his research, his extraordinary ability to analyze problems and outline necessary courses of action was invaluable and after all he finishes his work on time. Yirgalem is also an extremely personable young man with good leadership skills. He had participated in so many extracurricular activities in our university that appraises his leadership capacity and potential. He had worked as a member of the MU-MIT peace forum. His zeal to continue his further study and excel in the areas of Cyber Security and related fields is also highly appreciable. Hence, I am confident that he will be a tremendous asset for undergoing his higher study in your renowned institution. I believe that not only would he be able to make rewarding use of his stay at your institution, but there is also a lot that he might be contributing based on his excellent portfolio. Please do not hesitate to contact me if you need extra information.
I have the magnificent pleasure in writing the letter of recommendation for Mr.
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Yirgalem
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Gidey
, who was my student and
currently
an employee of an
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Information
Network and
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Security
Agency. He has completed his five years of study in
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Information
Technology (Engineering)
successfully
. I know him since he was a
first
year an undergraduate student. During his
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stay
, I learned his diligence, motivation, learn to
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think
critically
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in an innovative manner
.
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Yirgalem
is careful and creative thinker with an eye for
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details
and a devotion to logic, which serves him well both in the sciences and outside them. He has the terrific ability to draw on his
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own
experiences and observations to develop thoughtful opinions on a variety of issues.

In addition
, he
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joined
the department of Cyber
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Security
Research Division with the rank of Exploit Tool Researcher has been showing his perseverance and impressive communication
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skills
during his
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stay
in
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Information
Network and
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Security
Agency. During his
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stay
, he has shown keen interest and commitment in the Projects
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given
successfully
. His ability to learn
quickly
and flexibility has
been stunned
me in Automating Evasion of Antivirus Scanners,
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Crypters
, Binders and
overall
malware development using
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different
techniques
as well
. I found him as an intellectual who grasps new concepts
quickly
and accepts construction criticism and instruction concerning his work.
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Yirgalem
is accurate and meticulous in his research, his extraordinary ability to analyze problems and outline necessary courses of action was invaluable and
after all
he finishes his work on time.
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Yirgalem
is
also
an
extremely
personable young
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man
with
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good
leadership
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skills
. He had participated in
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so
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many
extracurricular activities in our university that appraises his leadership capacity and potential. He had worked as a member of the MU-MIT peace forum.

His zeal to continue his
further
study and excel in the areas of Cyber
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Security
and related fields is
also
highly
appreciable.
Hence
, I am confident that he will be a tremendous asset for undergoing his higher study in your renowned institution. I believe that not
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only
would he be able to
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make
rewarding
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use
of his
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stay
at your institution,
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but
there is
also
a lot that he might be contributing based on his excellent portfolio.
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Please
do not hesitate to contact me if you need extra
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information
.
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IELTS letter I have the magnificent pleasure in writing the letter of recommendation for Mr. Yirgalem Gidey, who was my student and currently an employee of an Information Network and Security Agency.

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5.5
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