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letter to friend who accepted to take care of your house in your absence informing him of important things to take care

letter to friend who accepted to take care of your house in your absence informing him of important things to take care GM9no
Hope this letter finds you in high spirits and good health. I am writing this letter to share some important information that you should keep in your mind while taking care of my house and pet during my absence. I am going to India for one month that is from 1st to 31st December to enjoy the winter break with my family. As you know, I have a pet in my home. I have already brought all the food items suitable for my pet and placed them in the dog house. You need to feed the dog with that diet two times in a day with some milk and egg. In addition to this, while taking the dog outside remember that he should be kept away from the street dogs. Additionally, please take care of the house applications, especially the kitchen ones. Do not overload the dishwasher. Furthermore, also check all the taps are shut off properly before leaving the house. I hope you will take care of all the things as per my instructions and enjoy your stay at my place.
Hope this letter finds you in high spirits and
good
health. I am writing this letter to share
some
important
information that you should
keep
in your mind while taking care of my
house
and pet during my absence.

I am going to India for one month
that is
from 1st to 31st December to enjoy the winter break with my family.

As you know, I have a pet in my home. I have already brought all the food items suitable for my pet and placed them in the
dog
house
. You need to feed the
dog
with that diet two times in a day with
some
milk and egg.
In addition
to this, while taking the
dog
outside remember that he should be
kept
away from the street
dogs
.
Additionally
,
please
take care of the
house
applications,
especially
the kitchen ones. Do not overload the dishwasher.
Furthermore
,
also
check
all the taps
are shut
off
properly
before
leaving the
house
.

I hope you will take care of all the things as per my instructions and enjoy your stay at my place.
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IELTS letter letter to friend who accepted to take care of your house in your absence informing him of important things to take care

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
182 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
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