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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about the important papers I lost while attending a meeting at your hotel on 30 October, 2019.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about the important papers I lost while attending a meeting at your hotel on 30 October, 2019. 9LwJ3
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about the important papers I lost while attending a meeting at your hotel on 30 October, 2019. I am not confirmed about the exact location where I lost those documents. But, I remember that they were with me when I went to the cafe in the basement of your hotel. I was sitting near the entrance, on the west side, and the time was around 2: 00 pm. The lost documents contain sensitive data of our customers. There can be negative consequences if someone misuses that information. Moreover, if the papers are not found, my job is at risk since the company has the policy to take stringent action on breach of confidential information. I need your help in finding the missing papers. Please ask the staff in the cafe to return my documents, and if there is no positive outcome, checking CCTV footage can be beneficial. I trust that you will be able to find them soon. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Muhammad Ahmad Saeed
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you about the
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important
papers I lost while attending a meeting at your hotel on 30
When specifying a month and year, the comma is unnecessary: "October 2019".
October, 2019
.

I am not confirmed about the exact location where I lost those documents.
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But
, I remember that they were with me when I went to the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
in the basement of your hotel. I was sitting near the entrance, on the west side, and the time was around 2: 00 pm.

The lost documents contain sensitive data of our customers. There can be
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
negative
consequences if someone misuses that information.
Moreover
, if the papers are not found, my job is at
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
risk
since the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
has the policy to take stringent action on breach of confidential information.

I need your
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help
in finding the missing papers.
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Please
ask the staff in the
'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"
cafe
to return my documents, and if there is no
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positive
outcome, checking CCTV footage can be beneficial. I trust that you will be able to find them
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soon
.

I hope to hear from you
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soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Muhammad Ahmad
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Saeed
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IELTS letter Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you about the important papers I lost while attending a meeting at your hotel on 30 October, 2019.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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