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Dear John, I am writing to thank you for helping me throughout the trip, and for sending me the photos. I was busy with office work earlier, so did not get time to thank you. I was excited to see the photos you just sent me, they really refreshed my memories of the tour. Now I miss all the friends I met over there, warm welcome, the hospitality, and the delicious food. When I came back from the trip, some of my office work was still pending, so I had to spend some time completing that work. Many times, I had to stay late in the office to finish the tasks. After the office, I had no time and energy for other activities, so I could not write this letter earlier. Now, I want to invite you to visit my city and stay with me. I will take you on a city tour, and I am sure you will enjoy sightseeing. Also, you will experience the local culture and taste delicious cuisines. I look forward to seeing you. Best wishes, Ahmad

Dear John,

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office
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time
 to thank you.

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office
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, I had to stay late in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
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 to finish the tasks. After the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withserviceworkcommissionjobstationplace
office
, I had no You use this word too often, consider replacing it withpointgenerationpastsecondturnspace
time
 and energy for other activities, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I could not write this letter earlier.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
, I want to invite you to visit my city and stay with me. I will take you on a city tour, and I am sure you will enjoy sightseeing. Also
, you will experience the local culture and taste delicious cuisines.

I look forward to seeing you.

Best wishes,

Ahmad