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Write a letter to a park authority about damage being made to the facilities of the park.

Write a letter to a park authority about damage being made to the facilities of the park. PVRjg

Dear Sir or Madam, My name is Farrukh. I am the resident of diamond house society, Islamabad. I am writing this letter to appraise you with some problems that locals are facing at Jonah park in our vicinity. Let me explain it in detail. The park was supposed to be managed by the government specified gardeners every day; however, they do not come to work for even days. The grass in the lawn of the garden has become so long that it has become difficult to even walk there. In addition, wooden benches where old people used to sit for hours every day have broken. Furthermore, all exercise equipments like weight lifters need to repaint. I would like you to take notice of all these issues in order to maintain the property. As you know parks are the lungs of the community, they have to be in a good shape. It would also be great for children to visit parks because they are becoming couch potatoes owing to sit idle at home. Hoping for a prompt action from your side! Farrukh Maqsood

Dear Sir or Madam,

My name is Farrukh. I am the resident of diamond This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 society, Islamabad. I am writing this letter to appraise you with This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 problems that locals are facing at Jonah You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 in our vicinity.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
Let
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :interpret
explain
 it in detail. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
was supposed
 to be managed
 by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
 specified gardeners every day; however
, they do not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to work for even days. The grass in the lawn of the garden has become This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 long that it has become difficult to even walk there. In addition
, wooden benches where This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to sit for hours every day have broken. Furthermore
, all exercise equipments like weight lifters need to repaint.

I would like you to take notice of all these issues in order to maintain the property. As you know You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parks
 are the lungs of the community, they This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 be in a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 shape. It would also
 be great for children to visit You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parks
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 they are becoming couch potatoes owing to sit idle at home.

Hoping for a prompt action from your side!

Farrukh Possible spelling mistake found.Manhood
Maqsood