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Complaint to a neighbour about noise

Dear Mr. Smith, My name is Hannah. I am writing to thank you for taking care of me for a week when I was hurt last month. I appreciate it for what you did for me last month. I could not walk after falling into a deep hole when I was hiking, neither could I contact anyone for help with no signal on my mobile phone. As a stranger to you, you devoted much of your time and effort to save my life and to take care of me after you discovered me. Without your help, I believe I could not survive. To express my appreciation, I would like to invite your family and you to my home for dinner next Sunday. Delicious crusine will be served at my home as my husband is a good cook. I hope to introduce you to my family as you played an important role in my life, so I can still live in the world. I am looking forward to seeing your loved ones and you next week. Best Regards, Hannah
Dear Mr. Smith,

My name is Hannah. I am writing to thank you for taking care of me for a week when I
was hurt
last month.

I appreciate it for what you did for me last month.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
could not walk after falling into a deep hole when I was hiking, neither could I contact anyone for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
with no signal on my mobile phone. As a stranger to you, you devoted much of your time and effort to save my life and to take care of me after you discovered me. Without your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
, I believe I could not survive.

To express my appreciation, I would like to invite your family and you to my home for dinner
next
Sunday. Delicious
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crusine
will
be served
at my home as my husband is a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
cook. I hope to introduce you to my family as you played an
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
important
role in my life,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
so
I can
still
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
live
in the world.

I am looking forward to seeing your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
loved
ones and you
next
week.

Best Regards,

Hannah
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IELTS letter Complaint to a neighbour about noise

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
177 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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