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You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.

You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend. RWLRk
Dear Catharine, Hi there! Hope you are fine and all your family are doing well. I am also fine despite of busy days here. You would be glad to know that I got an excellent job I dreamt for in Liverpool and am planning to settle down there. Anyway, I’m not going to ship my furniture to the new destination. I kick the fright charges around and in the end decide to sell them off. However, you were talking about android television you want to buy. That’s why, you can consider my one. It is Sony’s android TV. While Bravia is the cutting edge technology today, android provides a futuristic experience with its searching capabilities and voice. You can control the TV with simply your voice and even search the Internet simply by speaking to the TV. In addition, its 4k display heightens the gaming experience and gives the player a sense of euphoria. I think you are very interest in the TV I described above. I, however, want you to come and see its condition and functional procedure. I am happy to invite you for this on December 7, 2015. If you choose the TV after seeing it, then we would negotiate on the price. Hope to see you soon. Lots of love, Peter
Dear
Catharine
,

Hi there! Hope you are fine and all your family are doing well. I am
also
fine
despite of
busy days here. You would be glad to know that I
got
an excellent job I dreamt for in Liverpool and
am
planning to settle down there. Anyway, I’m not going to ship my furniture to the new destination. I kick the fright charges around and in the
end
decide to sell them off.

However
, you were talking about android television you want to
buy
. That’s why, you can consider my one. It is Sony’s android TV. While
Bravia
is the cutting edge technology
today
, android provides a futuristic experience with its searching capabilities and voice. You can control the TV with
simply
your voice and even search the Internet
simply
by speaking to the TV.
In addition
, its 4k display heightens the gaming experience and gives the player a sense of euphoria.

I
think
you are
very
interest
in the TV
I
described
above. I,
however
, want you to
come
and
see
its condition and functional procedure.
I
am happy to invite you for this on December 7, 2015. If you choose the TV after seeing it, then we would negotiate on the price.

Hope to
see
you
soon
.

Lots of
love
,

Peter
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IELTS letter You want to sell some of your furniture. You think a friend of yours might like to buy it from you. Write a letter to your friend.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
214 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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