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January 4, 2022 Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter to show my interest for the scholarship for my bachelor degree studies in law. Most of the time that I have decided to apply for a bachelor’s degree study in the university there is factor pulls me back, and it is the affordability of a bachelor’s degree studies. With a great determination I have and the hard work I have put in, I have graduated from the School of Tomorrow, one of the renown High Schools in Addis Ababa, Ethiopia. I am one of the best pupils in the class. I have been engaging in different school activities among which Justice Club is the most popular. My future career will be law where I am very much motivated to be a lawyer, because we are living in unjust and corrupted world where people are suffering from unequal and unjust views with regard to gender, ethnicity, age, position, etc. I would like to be an employee of the UN so that I can reach the whole world. Further, I would like to point out that I am very determined person and I will make the most out of this scholarship opportunity. I strongly believe that studying in reputable university would do more than only empower my career development; it will also give me the necessary tools to make use of my full potential. This opportunity I perceive to be an extra ordinary opportunity to have an interaction with students and scholars from a spectrum of cultural and professional backgrounds coming from all over the world. This is the type of network that is very important to integrate different ideas and perspective that pertains to diverse global issues. I am sincerely grateful for your consideration on my scholarship application and I am looking forward to receiving a favorable reply. Yididiya Tadesse
January 4,
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2022


Dear Sir/Madam

I am writing this letter to
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show
my interest for the scholarship for my bachelor degree studies in law. Most of the time that I have decided to apply for a bachelor’s degree study in the university there is factor pulls me back, and it is the affordability of a bachelor’s degree studies. With a great determination I have and the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
hard
work I have put in, I have graduated from the School of Tomorrow, one of the renown High Schools in Addis Ababa, Ethiopia. I am one of the best pupils in the
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class
. I have been engaging in
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different
school activities among which Justice Club is the most popular. My future career will be law where I am
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very
much motivated to be a lawyer,
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because
we are living in unjust and corrupted world where
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people
are suffering from unequal and unjust views with regard to gender, ethnicity, age, position, etc. I would like to be an employee of the UN
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so
that I can reach the whole world.

Further
, I would like to point out that I am
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
determined person and I will
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make
the most out of this scholarship opportunity. I
strongly
believe that studying in reputable university would do more than
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only
empower my career development; it will
also
give me the necessary tools to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
use
of my full potential. This opportunity I perceive to be an
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extra ordinary
opportunity to have an interaction with students and scholars from a spectrum of cultural and professional backgrounds coming from all over the world. This is the type of network
that is
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very
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important
to integrate
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different
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ideas
and perspective that pertains to diverse global issues.

I am
sincerely
grateful for your consideration on my scholarship
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application and
I am looking forward to receiving a favorable reply.

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Yididiya
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Tadesse
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