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You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part.

You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part. 52eMm
Dear Sir, I’m writing this letter for informing our community about our ‘Happy club’ which is organizing social gatherings in which people of different nations can take part and share their experiences and life lessons with each other. We would be highly thankful to you if you could publish about our club’s new initiative in your newspaper as everyone in our area is a regular reader of it. We have already appointed the executive and organizing committee of our club. Moreover, various activities that we will be holding are planned already. We are very excited to introduce everyone with the ‘Share your best and embarrassing moment’ program where people of all age groups can share their experiences. There is one more activity is will be the spotlight of the club which is ‘Learn my language with me’, in which every group member has the opportunity to teach others their native language in a fun way. We are launching these activities in mid-March. However, registration to become a part of our club will commence in early March, and registration fees are just $3 per person. Furthermore, please do not forget to mention my phone number 123455, in case interested folks have any queries related to the club or its membership. Yours faithfully, Navneet Kaur
Dear Sir,

I’m writing this letter for informing our community about our ‘Happy
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club’
which is organizing social gatherings in which
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
of
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
different
nations can
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
take part
and share their experiences and life lessons with each other. We would be
highly
thankful to you if you could publish about our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club’s
new initiative in your newspaper as everyone in our area is a regular reader of it.

We have already appointed the executive and organizing committee of our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
.
Moreover
, various activities that we will be holding
are planned
already. We are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
excited to introduce everyone with the ‘Share your best and embarrassing moment’ program where
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
of all age groups can share their experiences. There is one more activity is will be the spotlight of the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
which is ‘Learn my language with me’, in which every group member has the opportunity to teach others their native language
Consider replacing "in a fun way" with the adverb for "fun"; e.g., "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
in a fun way
.

We are launching these activities in mid-March.
However
, registration to become a part of our
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
will commence in early March, and registration fees are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
$3 per person.
Furthermore
,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
do not forget to mention my phone number 123455, in case interested folks have any queries related to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
club
or its membership.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Navneet
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Kaur
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IELTS letter You are about to start social meetings in a particular area where people from different nationalities can take part.

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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