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Letter for Job Application

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for babysitting your child that I came across your advertisement in an Australian magazine. I believe I have the experience and credentials that suit the requirements of this job. My passion is looking after children. Meanwhile, I would love to travel to Australia. In this way, I can meet new people and know their culture. It will be the first time I am coming to Australia, and I am sure it will be of great experience for me. Since I was 18, I have been working as a babysitter. Currently, I am taking care of two kids. Unfortunately, they are moving to another city, and soon I will be free. Given the fact that I have undergone various training related to raising children, I believe I can be of support and assistance to you. I find it rewarding spending time with children. In my leisure time, I would like to go to the gym. As you know keeping up with the children is physically demanding, therefore I have to stay fit. My other hobby is reading children's literature to become more familiar with their world. Please do not hesitate to ask for additional information you may require. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your kind attention. Yours faithfully, Aziz Granpayeh
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to apply for babysitting your child that I came across your advertisement in an Australian magazine. I believe I have the experience and credentials that suit the requirements of this job.

My passion is looking after children. Meanwhile, I would
love
to travel to Australia. In this way, I can
meet
new
people
and know their culture. It will be the
first
time I am coming to Australia, and I am sure it will be of great experience for me.

Since I was 18, I have been working as a babysitter.
Currently
, I am taking care of two kids. Unfortunately, they are moving to another city, and
soon
I will be free.
Given
the fact that I have undergone various training related to raising children, I believe I can be of support and assistance to you. I find it rewarding spending time with children.

In my leisure time, I would like to go to the gym. As you know keeping up with the children is
physically
demanding,
therefore
I
have to
stay fit. My other hobby is reading children's literature to become more familiar with their world.

Please
do not hesitate to
ask for
additional information you may require. I look forward to hearing from you. Thank you for your kind attention.

Yours
faithfully
,

Aziz
Granpayeh
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IELTS letter Letter for Job Application

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
222 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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