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asking advice letter . your friend lives in another city. you want to organise an English course at college in her town, ask advice from her.

asking advice letter. your friend lives in another city. you want to organise an English course at college in her town, ask advice from her. eeoGx
Dear Lola Anvarva, Iam writing to ask if you could give me some advice about organizing an English course at college in your town. Nowadays a lot of English teachers trying to gain CEFR and IELTS certificates. They are demanded improving knowledge and skills. I work at secondary school for ten years. My skills include working with youth and adults. In course of my present job I have been responsible for teaching them. In other hand, I am used to working at a fast pace to meet deadlines. I believe, the position you offer will give me the opportunity to achieve my plan. Would you mind offering me some advice about how to run my educational center? Thank you taking the time to read this letter. I understand that you are abusy person, and any advice you recommend would be greatly appreciated. If it is helpful, I would be more than happy to discuss my credentials over the phone or coffee. My contact details can be found at the end of this letter. Iwould appreciate it if you could give me your advice as soon as possible. Yours faithfully, Salima Nizomova. P, S. Tel. 99 483 62 47
Dear Lola
Anvarva
,

Iam
writing to ask if you could give me
some
advice
about organizing an English course at college in your town.

Nowadays
a lot of
English teachers trying to gain CEFR and IELTS certificates. They
are demanded
improving knowledge and
skills
.

I work at secondary school for ten years. My
skills
include working with youth and adults. In course of my present job I have been responsible for teaching them. In other hand, I am
used
to working at a
fast
pace to
meet
deadlines. I believe, the position you offer will give me the opportunity to achieve my plan. Would you mind offering me
some
advice
about how to run my educational center?

Thank you taking the time to read this letter. I understand that you
are abusy
person, and any
advice
you recommend would be
greatly
appreciated. If it is helpful, I would be more than happy to discuss my credentials over the phone or coffee. My contact
details
can
be found
at the
end
of this letter.

Iwould
appreciate it if you could give me your
advice
as
soon
as possible.

Yours
faithfully
,

Salima
Nizomova
.

P, S. Tel. 99 483 62 47
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IELTS letter asking advice letter. your friend lives in another city. you want to organise an English course at college in her town, ask advice from her.

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
197 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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