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You arrange a visit to a friend but due to some other event you will not be able to meet him. Write a letter to explain the important event, apologize for the situation and suggest a new arrangement.

You arrange a visit to a friend but due to some other event you will not be able to meet him. Write a letter to explain the important event, apologize for the situation and suggest a new arrangement. RkpLY
Dear Sam, Hope you are doing well. As we had planned for a meet up on coming week and I was too excited for this, but, I feel saddened to inform I will not be able to make it. Avon has been selected for the internship program at Microsoft, and he will be required to join them by 28th, so, the family has planned a party for him on the 27th. Yeah, the same day we had planned to meet, therefore, I will not be able to come up and see you. I know that we had so many things planned, but, I’m really sorry for this change in the plan. If it hadn’t been the farewell, then I would have definitely come. Nevertheless, I’m free after the 30th and would like to know if you can manage a week off. I can’t wait to see you! Best wishes, Gill
Dear Sam,

Hope you are doing well.

As we had
planned
for a
meet
up on coming week and I was too excited for this,
but
, I feel saddened to inform I will not be able to
make
it.

Avon has
been selected
for the internship program at Microsoft, and he will
be required
to
join
them by 28th,
so
, the family has
planned
a party for him on the 27th. Yeah, the same day we had
planned
to
meet
,
therefore
, I will not be able to
come
up and
see
you.

I know that we had
so
many
things
planned
,
but
, I’m
really
sorry for this
change
in the plan. If it hadn’t been the farewell, then I would have definitely
come
.

Nevertheless
, I’m free after the 30th and would like to know if you can manage a week off. I can’t wait to
see
you!

Best wishes,

Gill
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IELTS letter You arrange a visit to a friend but due to some other event you will not be able to meet him. Write a letter to explain the important event, apologize for the situation and suggest a new arrangement.

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  American English
8 paragraphs
149 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 7.0
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