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You apologize your teacher 25dnj

Dear Mrs. Fischer, I am writing to apologize for passing notes in class. I realize that you were discussing important concepts that are going to help us write our upcoming analysis essays and do well on the final, and I should have been paying closer attention. From now on, I'll limit my classroom communication to helpful comments that are related to the subject matter and wait to discuss personal things until after class. I also wanted to thank you for giving me a warning instead of detention because my coach would have benched me if I had been late to practice. I promise you won't have to make that decision again. Sincerely, Bill Tammen

Dear Mrs. Fischer,

I am writing to apologize for passing notes in This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
.

I realize that you were discussing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 concepts that are going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 us write our upcoming analysis essays and do well on the final, and I should have been paying closer attention. From This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 on, I'll limit my classroom communication to helpful comments that are related
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subject matter
 and wait to discuss personal things until after This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
.

I also
 wanted to thank you for giving me a warning instead
 of detention This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 my coach would have benched me if I had been late to practice. I promise you won't This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 that decision again.

Sincerely
,

Bill Possible spelling mistake found.TaxmenTam men
Tammen

IELTS letter You apologize your teacher

Letter

American English

6 paragraphs

113 words

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4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 5.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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