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You apologize your teacher

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Dear Mrs. Fischer, I am writing to apologize for passing notes in class. I realize that you were discussing important concepts that are going to help us write our upcoming analysis essays and do well on the final, and I should have been paying closer attention. From now on, I'll limit my classroom communication to helpful comments that are related to the subject matter and wait to discuss personal things until after class. I also wanted to thank you for giving me a warning instead of detention because my coach would have benched me if I had been late to practice. I promise you won't have to make that decision again. Sincerely, Bill Tammen
Dear Mrs. Fischer,

I am writing to apologize for passing notes in
class
.

I realize that you were discussing
important
concepts that are going to
help
us write our upcoming analysis essays and do well on the final, and I should have been paying closer attention. From
now
on, I'll limit my classroom communication to helpful comments that
are related
to the
subject matter
and wait to discuss personal things until after
class
.

I
also
wanted to thank you for giving me a warning
instead
of detention
because
my coach would have benched me if I had been late to practice. I promise you won't
have to
make
that decision again.

Sincerely
,

Bill
Tammen
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IELTS letter You apologize your teacher

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  American English
6 paragraphs
113 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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