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You should spend about 25 minutes on this task. You want to become a volunteer for the “University Students Against COVID-19” campaign organized by your faculty. Write an email to the faculty office to: ask for more information about this campaign (time, duties of the volunteers and so on), ask about the application procedure ask to join the campaign. You should write around 200 words. You do not need to include your name or addresses. Your response will be evaluated in terms of Task Fulfilment, Organization, Vocabulary and Grammar

You want to become a volunteer for the “University Students Against COVID-19” campaign organized by your faculty. Write an email to the faculty office to: ask for more information about this campaign (time, duties of the volunteers and so on), ask about the application procedure ask to join the campaign. You should write around 200 words. You do not need to include your name or addresses. Your response will be evaluated in terms of Task Fulfilment, Organization, Vocabulary and Grammar 1npBq
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing to inquire about a position in the “University Students Against COVID-19” campaign organized by the faculty. I am enthusiastic about your campaign, and would greatly appreciate the opportunity to participate in it. Firstly, I have just seen the faculty’s announcement on Facebook, from which I have found a lot of helpful information concerning rewarding benefits. However, I am still confused about the ways to join. Hence, I would be most grateful if you provide me with detailed information about this campaign such as the specific time and duties of the volunteers because it would give me insights into what I have to do. Another matter I need information on is whether you will be able to send me an email about the application procedure as I have not seen that in your post. What is more, please mail me an adequate document about the campaign so that I can register to join more smoothly and avoid missing any essential information. Finally, as a person who always wanted to contribute my bits of help and spread pandemic prevention messages to the community, I would greatly appreciate becoming a part of the meaningful campaign and giving you a hand. Moreover, I can also have a chance to acquire more experience and knowledge that will benefit my future career. I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much, and thank you in anticipation of your kind cooperation. Yours faithfully,
Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to inquire about a position in the “University Students Against COVID-19”
campaign
organized by the faculty. I am enthusiastic about your
campaign
, and would
greatly
appreciate the opportunity to participate in it.

Firstly
, I have
just
seen
the faculty’s announcement on Facebook, from which I have found
a lot of
helpful information concerning rewarding benefits.
However
, I am
still
confused about the ways to
join
.
Hence
, I would be most grateful if you provide me with detailed information about this
campaign
such as the specific time and duties of the volunteers
because
it would give me insights into what I
have to
do.

Another matter I need information on is whether you will be able to
send me an email
about the application procedure as I have not
seen
that in your post.
What is more
,
please
mail me an adequate document about the
campaign
so
that I can register to
join
more
smoothly
and avoid missing any essential information.

Finally
, as a person who always wanted to contribute my bits of
help
and spread pandemic prevention messages to the community, I would
greatly
appreciate becoming a part of the meaningful
campaign
and giving you a hand.
Moreover
, I can
also
have a chance to acquire more experience and knowledge that will benefit my future career.

I hope that my request will not inconvenience you too much, and thank you in anticipation of your kind cooperation.

Yours
faithfully
,
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IELTS letter You want to become a volunteer for the “University Students Against COVID-19” campaign organized by your faculty. Write an email to the faculty office to: ask for more information about this campaign (time, duties of the volunteers and so on), ask about the application procedure ask to join the campaign. You should write around 200 words. You do not need to include your name or addresses. Your response will be evaluated in terms of Task Fulfilment, Organization, Vocabulary and Grammar

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
243 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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