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Write a letter about an event and ask for permission to borrow facilities and the opening speech from the dean.

Write a letter about an event and ask for permission to borrow facilities and the opening speech from the dean. o60b3
Dear the English faculty Dean, I am writing on behalf of the FELTE Youth Council with the expectations to acquire permission to use the faculty facilities and your speech for our special event for freshmen called “Feel The Beat” occurring in two months’ time. This event acts as a springboard for the eradication of initial alienation among first-year students on entering university. The A2 front yard would be the main location to hold a full-day jamboree. Some other facilities including chairs, podiums, and standees are also a part of the property list. Additionally, it will be delightful if we have you as our opening speaker for the festival. The department is likely to reinforce its reputation for contributing to such a unique festival, and hence the enhanced credibility of the faculty and our university. I am really looking forward to your response soon. Yours sincerely, The FELTE president.
Dear the English faculty Dean,

I am writing on behalf of the
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FELTE
Youth Council with the expectations to acquire permission to
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use
the faculty facilities and your speech for our special
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
for freshmen called “Feel The Beat” occurring in two months’ time.

This
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
event
acts as a springboard for the eradication of initial alienation among
first
-year students on entering university. The A2 front yard would be the main location to hold a full-day jamboree.
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Some
other facilities including chairs, podiums, and standees are
also
a part of the property list.
Additionally
, it will be delightful if we have you as our opening speaker for the festival.

The department is likely to reinforce its reputation for contributing to such a unique festival, and
hence
the enhanced credibility of the faculty and our university.

I am
really
looking forward to your response
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soon
.

Yours
sincerely
, The
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FELTE
president.
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IELTS letter Write a letter about an event and ask for permission to borrow facilities and the opening speech from the dean.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
148 words
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