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Write a letter to a friend informing him about your move to a new locality. - reasons for moving, description of the new location, and invite him/her to visit your new house.

Write a letter to a friend informing him about your move to a new locality. - reasons for moving, description of the new location, and invite him/her to visit your new house. 5bqVN
Dear John, I hope you and your family are all well. I am very sorry for not in touch from few weeks. I want to inform you that I moved to a new place which is near to Brampton transit and seconday school. Therefore, I was busy to shift my things. Moreover, there are various resons why i moved such as there were lack of bus services as my family had to wait for a long time to take a bus. Apart from it, there were also less space for playing to children as my children felt frustration. Last but not the least, I want to share another good news that I got a new job which is near to my new house so, I can not also save my commuting time but also can save car gas. I am inviting you to visit my new home. I set up a small party in my backyard and invited to all my near and dears. I hope you wil come definitely and I will be happy to see you here. Yours loving friend, Lovepreet kaur
Dear John, I hope you and your family are all well. I am
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sorry for not in touch from few weeks. I want to inform you that I
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moved
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place which is near to Brampton transit and
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seconday
school.
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, I was busy to shift my things.
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moved
such as there were lack of bus services as my family had to wait for a long time to take a bus. Apart from it, there were
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less space for playing to children as my children felt frustration. Last
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but
not the least, I want to share another
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good
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that I
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a
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new
job which is near to my
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house
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, I can not
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save my commuting time
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but
also
can save car gas. I am inviting you to visit my
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new
home. I set up a
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party in my backyard and invited to all my near and dears.
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hope you
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definitely and I will be happy to
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you here. Yours loving friend,
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Lovepreet
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kaur
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a friend informing him about your move to a new locality. - reasons for moving, description of the new location, and invite him/her to visit your new house.

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
183 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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