Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.

A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor. BaeEw
Dear sir/madam, My name is Bhavika Macwan. I like to write this letter, because yesterday I read that The Boogi Woogi show should be stop according to your reporter. Your reporter complained about this show because he thinks that this show is worthless and totally waste of time to watch. It is fixing show. I do not know what is reality but i believe that it is very popular in all kind of age group. It is very entertaining for people. In this show, many interesting things to learn. If it is fixing show, its not big problem to everyone because in this time mostly show has fixing. I kindly request you please, do not take action like meaningless. This show is very useful to children. I am hoping that you can understand the situation and give positive answers. Thanking you in advance. Yours sincerely, Bhavika Macwan
Dear sir/madam, My name is
Possible spelling mistake found.
Bhavika
Possible spelling mistake found.
Macwan
. I like to write this letter,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
yesterday I read that The
Possible spelling mistake found.
Boogi
Possible spelling mistake found.
Woogi
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
should be
Did you mean "stopped"?
stop
according to your reporter. Your reporter complained about this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
he
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
thinks
that this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
is worthless and
totally
waste of time to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
watch
. It is fixing
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
show
.

I do not know what is reality
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
believe that it is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
popular in all kind of age group. It is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
entertaining for
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
. In this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
interesting things to learn. If it is fixing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
, its not
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
big
problem to everyone
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
because
in this time
mostly
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
has fixing.

I kindly request you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
please
, do not take action like meaningless. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
show
is
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
useful to children.

I am hoping that you can understand the situation and give
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
positive
answers. Thanking you in advance. Yours
sincerely
,
Possible spelling mistake found.
Bhavika
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Macwan

IELTS letter A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.

Letter
  American English
4 paragraphs
146 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • A reporter complained about a new TV program that you like. Write a letter to the newspaper editor.