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Write a letter to your friend inviting to him/her to attend the party. Explain: why you are orginising the party.Say why you want your friend to come to the party.Describe what you are planning.

Write a letter to your friend inviting to him/her to attend the party. Explain: why you are orginising the party. Say why you want your friend to come to the party. Describe what you are planning. 6daxG
Dear my friend Lisa. I am writing to inform you about a birthday party which is organised by me for the morning of Wednesday. It will be started at 8 pm on 30th of June at our local traditional Shedevr palace. I am organising tis party because of my daughter`s birhtday. She is completing 8 years and succesfully finished the first class. As you know, long before we haven`t seen each other because I had to work and study abroad. This party will be a good opportunity to us to meet and exchange our experience. For this reason I `m inviting all my friends. It will be start at 8 pm and dinner will start at 8: 30 onwards. At the event cultural programms, dance, singing will be performed. We ave also arranged a delicious birhtday cake at 22 pm at this event. I sincerely hope that you will be able to confirm your attendance at this invitation. I look forward to your presence on the birthday party. See you soonKind regards yours Monica
Dear my friend Lisa. I am writing to inform you about a birthday
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party
which is
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organised
by me for the morning of Wednesday. It will be
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started
at 8 pm on 30th of June at our local traditional
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Shedevr
palace. I am
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organising
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tis
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party
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because
of my
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daughter`s
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birhtday
. She is completing 8 years and
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succesfully
finished the
first
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class
. As you know, long
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before
we
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haven`t
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seen
each other
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because
I had to work and study abroad. This
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party
will be a
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good
opportunity to us to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
meet
and exchange our experience.
For this reason
You used an accent character instead of an apostrophe. Please use either "I'm" or "I’m".
I `m
inviting all my friends. It will be
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start
at 8 pm and dinner will
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start
at 8: 30 onwards. At the
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event
cultural
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programms
, dance, singing will
be performed
.
Do not use a noun immediately after the pronoun 'We'. Use a verb or an adverb, or possibly some other part of speech.
We ave
also
arranged a delicious
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birhtday
cake at 22 pm at this
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event
. I
sincerely
hope that you will be able to confirm your attendance at this invitation. I look forward to your presence on the birthday
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
party
.
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See
you
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soonKind
regards yours
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Monica
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend inviting to him/her to attend the party. Explain: why you are orginising the party. Say why you want your friend to come to the party. Describe what you are planning.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
173 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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