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There is construction of multi-storey building in the current park location. Write a letter to an editor of a newspaper. In your letter say: • How did you come to know about the plan • Why it is important for you • What is your opinion about this plan. Write at least 150 words.

There is construction of multi-storey building in the current park location. Write a letter to an editor of a newspaper. In your letter say: • How did you come to know about the plan • Why it is important for you • What is your opinion about this plan. Q8A01

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction in regard to the proposed housing Construction to be built in Azaiba park. Earlier this month I have seen a piece of news published in Oman Observer which was a heart breaking news to the people who are residing nearby it. NCC limited a renowned property developer has plans to demolish the existing park replace it with new apartments. I have been living near to this park for the past 7 years. I usually go for morning walk and perform exercises in the park to enjoy the fresh air, sunshine before proceeding for the rest of the day. On the top of that most of the young children would be playing in the evenings after the school and the aged people would be sitting and chatting with their friends of the same group, so we are all very much connected emotionally with this place. Having said the above, it will be a terrible mistake by the Company destroying the greenery and removing other facilities. People are no longer can use this park anymore. I would advise the Company through you to consider an alternate available free space for their housing project leaving the park in its original state for the welfare of the community and the local residents residing around the park. Thank you for hearing out and your consideration. Your Sincerely, B. A. Naidu

Dear Sir / Madam,

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Company
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 are no longer can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 anymore. I would advise the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
Company
 through you to consider an alternate available free space for their housing project leaving the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 in its original state for the welfare of the community and the local residents residing around the park.

Thank you for hearing out and your consideration.

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Your
Sincerely
,

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Naidu