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You visited your friend’s hometown last month and promised to meet him but you could not. Write to your friend.

You visited your friend’s hometown last month and promised to meet him but you could not. Write to your friend. m80ln
Dear Dr. BavarianDear Farshid, Well, I am writing to you to apologize for our canceled appointment. I could not meet you in the last month while visiting your hometown. I m sorry for your inconvenience. Actually, I had 3 days mission to carry out my company loan necessities to purchase and refurbish its new building. In this regard, I had several meetings with the Parsian bank manager to complete all general and specific forms and submit all required documents to them. Still, unfortunately, It took too much time to provide all necessities and conduct all paper works. However, I could not realize this amount of tasks and bureaucracies in advance. In addition, I had to come back very soon to collect missed documents based on the new checklist, obtain some signatures from our company chief executive, and get issued authority letters from the board of directors for stamping all bank and governmental commitment forms. In this regard, please accept my apology and let to rearrange our new appointment for the upcoming month so I will update you accordingly. Please give my best regard to your family and keep in touch. Best Regards, Abasad Safari
Dear Dr.
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BavarianDear
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Farshid
,

Well, I am writing to you to apologize for our canceled appointment. I could not
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meet
you in the last month while visiting your hometown.
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I m
sorry for your inconvenience. Actually, I had 3 days mission to carry out my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
loan necessities to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchase
and refurbish its new building. In this regard, I had several meetings with the
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Parsian
bank manager to complete all general and specific forms and submit all required documents to them.
Still
, unfortunately, It took too much time to provide all necessities and conduct all paper works.
However
, I could not realize this amount of tasks and bureaucracies in advance.
In addition
, I had to
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come
back
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very
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soon
to collect missed documents based on the new checklist, obtain
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some
signatures from our
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company
chief executive, and
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get
issued authority letters from the board of directors for stamping all bank and governmental commitment forms.

In this regard,
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please
accept my apology and
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let
to rearrange our new appointment for the upcoming month
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so
I will update you
accordingly
.

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Please
give my best regard to your family and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
in touch.

Best Regards,

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Abasad
Safari
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IELTS letter You visited your friend’s hometown last month and promised to meet him but you could not. Write to your friend.

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  American English
6 paragraphs
193 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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