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Write a letter to the college principal

Write a letter to the college principal a7169
Dear Sir, Iam witing this letter to request a leave of absence from work due to an emergency at home. I have been informed that my moher was taken ill this moming and has been admitted to the Health Care Fadility. She had been sufering from a severe badkache over the past week, with her condition worsening today. I am sorry for the short notice of my request, but i will need to leave work at the eariest I have handed over the supervision af my work to Mr. Atkinson, who wil keep you in the loop. In case of any query. please feel free to call me on my cell phone. I shall report back to office as soon as i can. I hope you will understanid my position and gant me a lave for today. I apologize for the inconvenience caused by my atisence. Yours faithfuly. Rodrey brown
Dear Sir,
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Iam
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witing
this letter to request a
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leave
of absence from work due to an emergency at home. I have
been informed
that my
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moher
was taken
ill this
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moming
and has
been admitted
to the Health Care
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Fadility
. She had been
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sufering
from a severe
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badkache
over the past week, with her condition worsening
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today
. I am sorry for the short notice of my request,
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but
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i
will need to
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leave
work at the
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eariest
I have handed over the supervision
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af
my work to Mr. Atkinson, who
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wil
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keep
you in the loop. In case of any query.
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please
feel free to call me on my cell phone. I shall report back to office as
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soon
as
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i
can. I hope you will
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understanid
my position and
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gant
me
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a lave
for
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today
.
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I
apologize for the inconvenience caused by my
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atisence
. Yours
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faithfuly
.
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Rodrey
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brown
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the college principal

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
149 words
This writing has been penalized,
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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