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You visited your friend’s hometown last month and promised to meet him but you could not. Write to your friend - Expressing your apology - Explaining why you couldn’t meet - Suggesting when to meet later

You visited your friend’s hometown last month and promised to meet him but you could not. Write to your friend - Expressing your apology - Explaining why you couldn’t meet - Suggesting when to meet later Wyn5K
Dear Peter, I am writing to sincerely apologise for not arranging a meeting with you despite the fact that I was in your city last week. I am really sorry that I was not able to make it as we have not seen each other for ages and I miss you a lot. To be honest, I thought that I would have enough free time to go out with you. However, as it was a business trip I had to give lectures about a piece of new equipment in our branch office. In addition, the head of the branch asked me to go on a field trip with topographers’ team to provide a demonstration of the equipment work in practice. Actually, I was totally occupied with the training of my colleagues that I even did not have a minute to sit down and relax. Anyway, I think that we will definitely meet in a couple of weeks because I am coming for my sister's wedding and you are invited as well. Let us meet on 8th September prior to the wedding and go together or if you have other plans I will see you at the celebration. Please, let me know what you will decide. Take care, Maria
Dear Peter,

I am writing to
sincerely
apologise
for not arranging a meeting with you despite the fact that I was in your city last week. I am
really
sorry that I was not able to
make
it as we have not
seen
each other for ages and I miss you a lot.

To be honest, I
thought
that I would have
enough
free time to go out with you.
However
, as it was a business trip I had to give lectures about a piece of new equipment in our branch office.
In addition
, the head of the branch asked me to go on a field trip with topographers’ team to provide a demonstration of the equipment work in practice. Actually, I was
totally
occupied with the training of my colleagues that I even did not have a minute to sit down and relax.

Anyway, I
think
that we will definitely
meet
in a couple of weeks
because
I am coming for my sister's wedding and you
are invited
as well
.
Let
us
meet
on 8th September prior to the wedding and go together or if you have other plans I will
see
you at the celebration.

Please
,
let
me know what you will decide.

Take care,

Maria
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IELTS letter You visited your friend’s hometown last month and promised to meet him but you could not. Write to your friend - Expressing your apology - Explaining why you couldn’t meet - Suggesting when to meet later

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
207 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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